Very good! Interesting plot idea. I can't wait to read more from this story. I really liked how you did the train scene, because it so closely followed the book. Good job (:
You guy's need to write another chapter. I feel like every time I see Jordan's sig I click on it to see if you've updated this story.
Write guy's, you've got an awesome thing going here, don't let it do down the drain!
Brilliant, Looking forward to seeing where this goes. Please continue.
Ohhh! This is a great beginning! :D
Amazing for just a first chapter! Can't wait for more! But honestly this was like looking at my life through someone elses eyes, you captured Rose's feelings perfectly!
First off, I love the son at the beginning! Simple Plan is my favourite band!
awwwww poor rose! This is great! I'm definately going to keep reading!
DUDE this is a fantastic first chapter! I think this is the first Rose-centric fic I've read, and I absolutely loved it. I adored how you wrote her interactions with and her feelings about her parents. Getting inside her head, I can completely see the Slytherin. Looking forward to more!
I am most deffently going to favorite this. I can't wait to see what Rose is like.
Loved it! New chapter soon please...
-dances in- I loved it, dearies! Absolutely amazing, and I can't wait to see what you do with your plot. Continue, s'il te plait. =)
Your idea is wonderful, i loved the story very much. I hope you update soon.! And... at the end, just a commentary, i think it is said: "Where the hell had I gone wrong."
I don't know if I am correct but I felt this mistake.
Great story!! I hope you continue it- I really enjoyed it. :)