Reviewer: Ren Shire
Date: 06/24/08 18:16
Chapter: He Leaves His Legacy On Marble Floors

aggh i meant i love sirius black, lov ur storyyyy

Reviewer: Ren Shire
Date: 06/24/08 18:15
Chapter: He Leaves His Legacy On Marble Floors

cool i like it a lot .

Reviewer: Nez
Date: 06/24/08 16:12
Chapter: He Leaves His Legacy On Marble Floors

I think this is an excellent portrayal of young Sirius and the way things just are in the Black household. And the present tense works perfectly for this story. I'm really glad I took a moment to read it because it's very good and touching. My favourite part would be:

He’s not used to dependency. He’s used to unpredictable tempers and house elves that creep up in the shadows unexpectedly and wheeze insults under their breath, and little brothers who change and grow when you aren’t looking.

All in all, a great read!

Reviewer: HungarianWitch
Date: 06/24/08 10:46
Chapter: He Leaves His Legacy On Marble Floors

YES, you wrote a fic about how Sirius left his "fathers house", I'm so pleased that you did it! I was looking for a fic like this for a long time now, but I haven't found one, that was well written and not too brutal, but believable! Yours had everything! At "The Time of Our Lives" I already said how I love your Sirius, the same goes here too!
I hope you continue this :D

Author's Response: Yay! A 'Time of Our Lives' reader! I'm so glad you liked this (admittedly more dark) portrayel of Sirius. Thanks the review! -Ashley

Reviewer: Elf01
Date: 06/24/08 3:16
Chapter: He Leaves His Legacy On Marble Floors

I liked this. The part about the dog was good, as was Sirus commenting that it was like everything in the house. Nothing was mentioned but it was obvious what had happened.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it. The dog was orginally added as an homage to Sirius's animagus form, but it grew into this much more dark sub-plot. What can I say? Thanks so much for the review! -Ashley

Reviewer: Ren Shire
Date: 06/23/08 20:41
Chapter: He Leaves His Legacy On Marble Floors

it wont let me read it! it says there are no chapters! but the title is very good...

Author's Response: I've contacted a moderator and the problem has since been fixed. Thanks so much for bringing this to my attention! And I'm glad you liked the title. :)

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