Reviewer: Raffles
Date: 08/20/08 7:07
Chapter: The Kiss That Never Happened

This is the second time i have read this poem and it still strikes me with such emotion. You really described everything so beautifully. It's really great to see another version and idea about harry potter. Before this poem i was all into canon and stuff (you know, ginny/harry, ron/hermione) but after reading this poem it made me reconsider. Hermione and Harry would fit together real well! This poem had made me think of this ship as a possibility. Your a really great writer, because you were able to change a persons (me) view and not many people are able to do that. So.. Congratulations on this beautiful poem and on being an awesome writer! I actually think this is one the most saddest and emotion fullest poem I have ever read!

Author's Response: Wow. You are now my official favorite commenter! Let me tell you, I live on reviews like yours!!! It made me extremely happy to read your thoughts on the poem and how it made you think a little differently. Thank you and I'm really happy that you like the poem!

Reviewer: Raffles
Date: 07/19/08 3:59
Chapter: The Kiss That Never Happened

wow, rip out my heart and stomp on it will you!
this poem was beautiful. it had so much emotion and feelings. After reading this poem I have tears in my eyes.
ure a really good writer.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comments! I really tried to get the emotions that Hermione was feeling onto the page and I'm glad that liked it.

Reviewer: cjbaggins
Date: 07/06/08 21:11
Chapter: The Kiss That Never Happened

That's well done, especially for a first attempt at poetry. I've never mastered that medium myself, so have always admired those who are able to express their thoughts and ideas in that way. Although I don't happen to sail on the same ship you do, I feel you've made the emotions rather believable. Keep writing! cj

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: missacharae
Date: 07/06/08 5:06
Chapter: The Kiss That Never Happened

it's really good!!
but hermione's birthday is september 19th i think. so she was 15.

Author's Response: thanks for the info...I didn't think about when her birthday was. I'm glad that you like it!

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