Excellent story, Leah. A very enjoyable read. I could definitely see the rhetorical devices being used to their full advantages. You should be proud!
This is a most wonderful and IC one-shot. Most people resort to clichés when it comes to Tom Riddle, and that deeply hurts me. But this was an excellent one-shot, hitting the nail on the head about how Tom would have made his first Horcrux.
Very well written story and it seems so real! I like the rhetorical additions (you can see my assignment threads in our class once I have time to review this again and have time to post it!). :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Chris! I'll be reviewing your soonest, as I skimmed it quickly!
Leah, you never cease to amaze me with your brilliance.
The process of Horcrux making that you have shown is so . . . evil and terrifying, and I utterly love it. :P
You characterize Tom very well. Good job, can't wait to see more from you!
Author's Response: Aah, thanks Haylee, you are the best!
Very interesting story, nice and creepy. I like how it's told from Voldemort's POV because you can really see his reasoning and just how crazy he is actually becoming. Creative means of creating a Horcrux also. Well done story! Good luck in the challenge!
Author's Response: Thank you! It's fun writing from his POV, but it makes you hard to live with!