Reviewer: Colores
Date: 08/22/08 16:48
Chapter: Chapter 1

Excellent story, Leah. A very enjoyable read. I could definitely see the rhetorical devices being used to their full advantages. You should be proud!

Reviewer: go go ravenclaw
Date: 08/03/08 7:45
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hey, Leah!

This is a most wonderful and IC one-shot. Most people resort to clichés when it comes to Tom Riddle, and that deeply hurts me. But this was an excellent one-shot, hitting the nail on the head about how Tom would have made his first Horcrux.

Really great!

Reviewer: Cwiddy
Date: 07/21/08 13:31
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very well written story and it seems so real! I like the rhetorical additions (you can see my assignment threads in our class once I have time to review this again and have time to post it!). :)

Chris

Author's Response: Thanks, Chris! I'll be reviewing your soonest, as I skimmed it quickly!

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 06/30/08 13:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

Leah, you never cease to amaze me with your brilliance.

The process of Horcrux making that you have shown is so . . . evil and terrifying, and I utterly love it. :P

You characterize Tom very well. Good job, can't wait to see more from you!

-Haylee

Author's Response: Aah, thanks Haylee, you are the best!

Reviewer: GryffindorGoddess
Date: 06/30/08 11:42
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very interesting story, nice and creepy. I like how it's told from Voldemort's POV because you can really see his reasoning and just how crazy he is actually becoming. Creative means of creating a Horcrux also. Well done story! Good luck in the challenge!
~Ashley

Author's Response: Thank you! It's fun writing from his POV, but it makes you hard to live with!

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