Reviews For Bad Luck, Prongs
Reviewer: xoxoZMHxo
Date: 07/14/08 11:56
Chapter: Surprise Head Boy

good story--cant wait for u to update more

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: Nymphea
Date: 07/07/08 20:15
Chapter: Surprise Head Boy

this looks promising--nice job and update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm still going back over the second chapter.

Reviewer: prongs_n_me22
Date: 07/07/08 1:32
Chapter: Surprise Head Boy

you have got to hurry and update, cause Im totally digging this story, and I really wanna know what happens! :D

Author's Response: Alright. :)

Reviewer: LilyPotter65
Date: 07/06/08 15:13
Chapter: Surprise Head Boy

I just submitted the second chapter.

Yeah, uh huh, sure. I don't see second chapter! When did you submit it anyways, yesterday? Sorry, it's just that I like updates on the story fast, no offense. But, your story is rather good.

Reviewer: Afifa
Date: 07/04/08 2:08
Chapter: Surprise Head Boy

 Lovely beginning!

A few nitpicks though:

It was a pity his best friends were the infamous Marauders, the well-known pranksters of Hogarts.

The spelling of 'Hogwarts' is wrong.

She half expected him to smirk and say something witty (or something he considered witty, but he seemed just as astonished as she was.

The bracket is not closed.

Other than that, it was a pretty good chapter. =)

Author's Response: Yeah - I went back through and found several typos and stuff. rnrnThanks for your review!

Reviewer: LilyPotter65
Date: 07/03/08 8:43
Chapter: Surprise Head Boy

Good so far, but you left me hanging! Keep writing!

Author's Response: I just submitted the second chapter.

Reviewer: Wolfgirl08
Date: 07/02/08 15:46
Chapter: Surprise Head Boy

Looks good.

Author's Response: Thanks!

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