good story--cant wait for u to update more
Author's Response: Thanks.
this looks promising--nice job and update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm still going back over the second chapter.
you have got to hurry and update, cause Im totally digging this story, and I really wanna know what happens! :D
Author's Response: Alright. :)
I just submitted the second chapter.
Yeah, uh huh, sure. I don't see second chapter! When did you submit it anyways, yesterday? Sorry, it's just that I like updates on the story fast, no offense. But, your story is rather good.
Lovely beginning!
A few nitpicks though:
It was a pity his best friends were the infamous Marauders, the well-known pranksters of Hogarts.
The spelling of 'Hogwarts' is wrong.
She half expected him to smirk and say something witty (or something he considered witty, but he seemed just as astonished as she was.
The bracket is not closed.
Other than that, it was a pretty good chapter. =)
Author's Response: Yeah - I went back through and found several typos and stuff. rnrnThanks for your review!
Good so far, but you left me hanging! Keep writing!
Author's Response: I just submitted the second chapter.
Looks good.
Author's Response: Thanks!
