Reviews For Playing With Fire
Reviewer: jediprankster
Date: 06/24/08 21:16
Chapter: Chapter 1: Playing With Fire

It's a good beginning. I like it so far. I look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you. I am definatly continuing the story, but I am giving it a little bit of a break. There are so many other great angles to explore in Harry Potter, and right now im enthralling myself with this one, and two others. I also have a short, completed story in the queue

Reviewer: Ren Shire
Date: 06/23/08 15:22
Chapter: Chapter 1: Playing With Fire

Just so you all know...
I have 6 pages done on the second chapter. it's not close to finished yet, and I have to really work on the beginning of the chapter, because its a little slow, but it will definatly be up by the end of this week (that is if it's approved!)
Thanks for reading!!!
~Renny Shire :]

Reviewer: megan_grace1405
Date: 06/23/08 4:40
Chapter: Chapter 1: Playing With Fire

thats so sweet, im looking forward to the following chapters

Author's Response: *watery grin* thanks so much. it means alot!

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 06/22/08 20:52
Chapter: Chapter 1: Playing With Fire

Ooooo!! Please hurry with thatnext chapter!! I love this story and Lily sounds so precious...Imagine, playing with fire and not getting burned. Oh if only it were real....Oh well, I'm sure Lily's feelings are like every other child's when they see their siblings go off to school. Especially a school like Hogwarts. To Lily, it must sound like a fun place, but just wait until she experiances it for real.
Once again, thanks for a great read!

Author's Response: thanks sooo much! you cant imagine how much such great reviews mean to me!!!!!!

Reviewer: Ren Shire
Date: 06/22/08 19:12
Chapter: Chapter 1: Playing With Fire

Oh, people just so you know, I was joking about the "beady eyes" part. its an inside joke.

Renny Shire

Reviewer: Shiloh Julian Edson
Date: 06/22/08 17:40
Chapter: Chapter 1: Playing With Fire

Awesome job, Ren! I love your story! It's so cool how she makes a cat out of the fire. I wish I could do that. Lily's going to be pretty lonely without her brothers home all year. I feel bad for her.

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to write a review for Playing With Fire...rnIt's always nice to brighten someone's day with a "Good Job" after the work that people put in to make these things happen! *beady eyes*rnrn~Renny Shire

Reviewer: Ren Shire
Date: 06/22/08 13:36
Chapter: Chapter 1: Playing With Fire


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