Reviews For Choices
Reviewer: PurpleTree
Date: 05/17/09 18:49
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ooooh! This was really good! I like it! It really showed why Lily chose James instead of Severus, which a lot of fics don't touch on. Good job!

Reviewer: GinnyAndHarry214365
Date: 03/03/09 12:15
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow, that was a bit sad, but I like sad stories, they pass the time real easily. It was really good.

Reviewer: xoxoZMHxo
Date: 07/05/08 15:44
Chapter: Chapter 1

awww so cute!!!

Reviewer: LilyPotter65
Date: 07/01/08 17:45
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awwww.... how sweet! It is a great story! I loved it. Very sweet!

Reviewer: LilyPotter65
Date: 07/01/08 17:45
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awwww.... how sweet! It is a great story! I loved it. Very sweet!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Striped Candycane
Date: 07/01/08 5:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hmmm...as much as I love this idea and the whole Severus/Lily bit, I'm kind of unsure about Lily's characterization. I think its important to remember that she is the one that broke ties with Snape, and she did so in a very firm, decided way. Even though I can see her thinking about Severus on her wedding day, and perhaps even feeling slightly regretful, I can't see her crying over him.

There were, however, many things I did like about this piece, especially the following quote: “ 'Would you have extended James the same courtesy?' I demanded. 'Would you have invited your worst enemy to your wedding, knowing what he meant to your future wife? Knowing that having him there on your wedding day would have meant everything to her?' ”

I thought this was very insightful. I think that Snape harbors an extreme loathing towards James, even if it is perhaps justifiable, while James just feels slightly indifferent, even if he recognizes Snape as an enemy.

I also appreciated James's final characterization, even though as a big Severus/Lily fan I'm a little apt to dislike him. I think it really showed that Lily had a good reason for marrying him other than his good looks.

Author's Response: Yes, your right Lily is a bit OOC. Didn't really think about that till after I had written it. The story doesn't really work with out it I guess. Ah well. I'm glad you enjoyed it anyways =)

Reviewer: LunaWorshiper
Date: 06/30/08 22:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

Cool, the first review! That has to earn me some brownie points right?
I absolutly LOVED this story. It was well written and amazing. I loved your depiction of what Lily was going threw and how much James loved her.
This was amazing. =]

Author's Response: Thank you!

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