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Reviewer: I hate Tuney
Date: 11/29/10 17:17
Chapter: Unforgivable

I enjoyed it..well done !!! :))))

Reviewer: stella7gem
Date: 02/18/09 17:39
Chapter: Unforgivable

Beautiful fic. Really

Reviewer: HermioneGrangerfan
Date: 09/21/08 9:24
Chapter: Unforgivable

i also thought lily was a bit to easy by telling james how she she feels but the bit the bit at the end with the rose...a tear fell from my eye :'(

Reviewer: betty boop
Date: 07/10/08 16:57
Chapter: Unforgivable

hi.. my first review xD
well i liked the way it started but actually yes, at the end Lily did seem quickly convinze by james maybe u should have make her a litlle more difficult to get but anyway it was to cool to read!!!
(sorry if I have a bad grammar haha i'm mexican xD and i'm still leraning so gracias y adios

Reviewer: Beebbop
Date: 07/03/08 16:23
Chapter: Unforgivable

I liked it, it as very sad from Snape's point of view but I don't think anyone could ever see them together. I think Lily was a bit confident if you know what I mean in the last bit when telling James she liked him, but I loved the fiction.

Author's Response: Thanks for your input, and I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4
Date: 07/02/08 14:01
Chapter: Unforgivable

Wow. Snape had the rose, and was gonna give it to Lily and then... whoa! I finally caught on! He's finally done with her! I'm having a hyper, yet slow on comprehending day. GREAT JOB THOUGH! I liked it, except Lily seemed a bit too cliched towards the end, in the second last paragraph. I didn't see anything else in the story that I would have a critique on, because the rest was AWESOME!!!! Great job! {BeccA}

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the critique on Lily.

Reviewer: Tonks in disguise
Date: 07/02/08 1:08
Chapter: Unforgivable

thats sooo sad :(

Author's Response: Yeah it is a pretty sad story. I hope you still liked it, though.

Reviewer: sam_1034_lily
Date: 07/01/08 23:11
Chapter: Unforgivable

omg poor snape anywayz gud job i really liked it

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: siriuslysirius92
Date: 07/01/08 22:43
Chapter: Unforgivable

that was greata281;

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Silvermoon25
Date: 07/01/08 20:59
Chapter: Unforgivable

A very interesting fanfic. Good job!

:)

Author's Response: Thank you!

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