Reviews For Forever Sisters
Reviewer: Elf01
Date: 06/23/08 3:17
Chapter: Chapter 1

I like this. Even though they may not have spoken much Andromeda never abandoned Narcissa. No matter how much sisters fight they always care about each other, and you've shown that here.

I think that if Andromeda was a Gryffindor that Narcissa would have been less inclined to be worried about being sorted into the wrong house.

I like her reaction when Andromeda leaves. This is Narcissa feeling abandoned and hitting out rather than really meaning what she is saying.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!!! Hmm....I do see your point with the House thing...

Reviewer: Sariana
Date: 06/22/08 1:15
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh, this makes me miss my sister. Very sweet story, and I agree that you've used the quotes nicely.

Author's Response: Oh, sorry about missing your sister. I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: ink_daughter
Date: 06/21/08 19:16
Chapter: Chapter 1

I did enjoy this very much! I liked how you used quotes as breakers- it was a nice touch.

Author's Response: Why thanks youuu:)

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 06/21/08 13:43
Chapter: Chapter 1

*sniff* great story! but i think that teddy would still have lived with andromeda, even tho he would have seen harry all the time of course....lol but other than that great story! i loved all the quotes as well, they were all so true! :-P

Author's Response: Thanks! I do agree kinda, I meant that to be like he was visiting his godfather, and thats where he belonged. But thanks for the review!

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