Hey plz update quickly...i loved ur story!!!!!
gr8 work (as usual) when r updating... hope u do soon
Lily and James both seem kind of mean in this story, but I like it anyway. It's a nice change. But if Sirius likes Lily's friend, why did he dump her?
wow i am sooooo eager to see the result of both of their plans colliding!!!!
Please update soon! When I say soon, I mean soon. Not some secret code word that most authors use for months.
Yay! She was proven wrong! So, what I predict will happen is Lily will actually fall in love with James. Of course, I'm either right or partially right, because they do end up getting married.
Ooh, we're getting into the snogging/seducing part, now! Eee, this is so exciting!
So good but so short! Pleaz write more.
please write another chapter the story is soooo good.
I love this twist on the story of J and L. Good work. Please update! Oh, and I'd really like to see a bit of Frank and Alice action... not snogging, just shy crushiness. I think that would be cute!!
I think this chapter is great for a beginning!
update soon! i know you actually have a life and everything, but this story is really good!
eeerrrrr............lily would go with the plan to seduce unsuspecting potter and lily's friends would put a spellor charm on potter so that he would serenade lily in the great hall.
sorry,, but i am brain dead right now. do you have writer's block?
this story is great and i am now tired from staying up reading this1 keep writing this is a lovely story.
i love this story it is different from the other L/J ships and is a way of stalling my homework! anywyas, please keep writing because i really like this story and you are a good writer (when do you find the time to write?)
