its good but i think lily is stupid in this story
but we cant wait for the next chapter
CANT WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!
[that wasn't yelling, it was just emotional ;p] But seriously, great twisted story, It pulled me in quickly. I like that!
I READ THE WHOLE STORIE AND I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-LibertyV
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-LibertyV
Very entertaining, as usual .
I am in love with your talent, as usual .
And I better be seeing another chapter...
As usual .
XD
You say you'll update...Soon enough? It can never be soon enough! I love this story - it is tied for my all-time favorite fanfic (It's tied with Stranded, your HG/DM fic). You haven't updated in forever- I'm about to die from waiting so long. You didn't give up on this story, did you? That would ruin my life! Literally. I have a pretty pathetic life that depends on this story. So update, please! By the way... this is an amazing story that everyone should read- if they don't read it they won't be complete and will live a horrible, cursed, half - life. Just like Voldemort! This story is awesome! Thank you for writing!
omgsh! you are such an AMAZING writer! pleassseeee write more! Heyyy and write some more Lily/James fics! You are so good at them!
that was really good! loved reading it!!!!
You portray James character very well 8.7/10
"Dreams are meant for nighttime. And no more pranks, Mr. Potter"
I can tottaly picture Lily saying that.
Good description 8.5/10
chica..u bttr update fast..I'm addicted to this story..so, stop reading this and update already!!
It was just...... GR8..... marvellous...... wonderful .......and really cool !!!!!
why dont u update a little more...frequently!!!?? GOSH! PLEASE do!!
I just read the whole story, and I must say, I adore it!
It's a very good idea. It is original and compelling. There are complete squee moments and then ones that just make you want to smack your forehead.
You've really made it so Lily and James are the perfect match You've portrayed their relationship and James' character very well. I absolutely love James in this story. What I wouldn't give to be Lily!
I can't wait for the next chapter. This is a definite favorite. :)
Okay, so you won't write Sirius dressed in nothing but chocolate running around the Great Hall. But will you write JAMES dressed in nothing but chocolate and an invisibilty cloak running around Slughorn's party? ;)
Ahh! I hate it when authors create a story and start like 4 chapters and then disappear! It is so annoying!
When will you update? Have you abondoned this story...*does puppy dog face*...? Please dont.