I LOVE IT!!!!!! Keep it up!!!!!!
lol, i love you're story, except that since lily does actually like him because she's "melting" why would she want to plan revenge on him immediately after? shouldn't there be something that makes her REALLY REALLY mad? and then if not, then shouldn't it just be lily trying to teach him a lesson, not revenge? well, sorry for being so annoying, lol, bye
Author's Response: hm... good points, I must admit, but lily doesn't really like him. She had said she "hated" him in the first chapter (even though that shall be explained further later on) but that doesn't mean that just because you hate someone that you can't melt in their arms if they are such a great kisser (will be explained in later chapters further.) As for the "teach him a lesson, not revenge" good point. However Lily IS mad at James. It may not seem as much, but what I'm trying to show is that James has been doing this for so long that promising that after kissing her he wouldn't go back to being a kid had just gone too far. That was just the "end of the line" so to speak. But indeed you are correct in one manner, it is just teaching Potter a lesson---FOR NOW. Revenge will come later. The entire plot has not yet begun but when it does you'll see why the events that happened in chapter 1 had "planted the seeds of revenge in Lily Evans' mind" and how due to what happened to Natty in ch. 2 it was time for her get revenge, not for herself, but for everyone who had been affected by those prats. (will be explained further in next chapters.) You haven't been annoying at all. I like to hear from someone who actually thinks about my story more than what meets the eye. Thanks!
Really good plot, update SOON!! I'm dying!! NOBODY UPDATES ANYMORE!!! *sob*
Can you PLEASE update?
Im not even sure if you read your reveiws since you never answer them but I would really really like you to make your next chapter... Cause im like dying here!!!!!!!
I love it! it is fantastic but ireally want you to update on stranded i have been waiting for ages!!! r:9
I luffs it! *huggles fanfic* Aheh....yesh. Well update soon, pretty please because I want to know more! The suspense will kill me!
Ahh! The suspense is killing me! i LOVE this kind of revenge!!!! PLEASE PLEASE update soon!
nvm i hadnt read it i had jus clicked it to see if there was another chapter and saw there was only one. Well anyways... Hurry up with the next chapter!
wat happened to chapter 2! its not there anymore!
omg! you are my favorite fanfiction writer of all time. you rock! I'm off to read chapter 2...
Great chapter! Love how Lily plans to get revenge ... Can't wait for Chapter 3!
Wow! I really really like this. I love they way you have portrayed James as an arrogant self-cetered idiot by that way. Keep writting and post more soon!!
Absolutely love it! Like the little suspense going on and have a great way of capturing James as an ... arrogant bullying toerag? lol
Awsome plot! Definitely going on faves too! Update sooon!