Reviews For Taste of Revenge
Reviewer: Rosanna_Tapioca
Date: 02/13/05 19:59
Chapter: It Began With a Kiss

I LOVE IT!!!!!! Keep it up!!!!!!

Reviewer: Siri_luver
Date: 02/13/05 19:06
Chapter: It Began With a Kiss

lol, i love you're story, except that since lily does actually like him because she's "melting" why would she want to plan revenge on him immediately after? shouldn't there be something that makes her REALLY REALLY mad? and then if not, then shouldn't it just be lily trying to teach him a lesson, not revenge? well, sorry for being so annoying, lol, bye

Author's Response: hm... good points, I must admit, but lily doesn't really like him. She had said she "hated" him in the first chapter (even though that shall be explained further later on) but that doesn't mean that just because you hate someone that you can't melt in their arms if they are such a great kisser (will be explained in later chapters further.) As for the "teach him a lesson, not revenge" good point. However Lily IS mad at James. It may not seem as much, but what I'm trying to show is that James has been doing this for so long that promising that after kissing her he wouldn't go back to being a kid had just gone too far. That was just the "end of the line" so to speak. But indeed you are correct in one manner, it is just teaching Potter a lesson---FOR NOW. Revenge will come later. The entire plot has not yet begun but when it does you'll see why the events that happened in chapter 1 had "planted the seeds of revenge in Lily Evans' mind" and how due to what happened to Natty in ch. 2 it was time for her get revenge, not for herself, but for everyone who had been affected by those prats. (will be explained further in next chapters.) You haven't been annoying at all. I like to hear from someone who actually thinks about my story more than what meets the eye. Thanks!

Reviewer: Jamesie_is_MINE
Date: 02/13/05 18:28
Chapter: It Began With a Kiss

Really good plot, update SOON!! I'm dying!! NOBODY UPDATES ANYMORE!!! *sob*

Reviewer: TotallyClueless
Date: 02/02/05 20:02
Chapter: It Began With a Kiss

Can you PLEASE update?

Reviewer: Hedwig22
Date: 01/23/05 12:16
Chapter: It Began With a Kiss

Im not even sure if you read your reveiws since you never answer them but I would really really like you to make your next chapter... Cause im like dying here!!!!!!!

Reviewer: myne
Date: 01/22/05 0:11
Chapter: It Began With a Kiss

I love it! it is fantastic but ireally want you to update on stranded i have been waiting for ages!!! r:9

Reviewer: firstflier
Date: 01/08/05 9:55
Chapter: It Began With a Kiss

I luffs it! *huggles fanfic* Aheh....yesh. Well update soon, pretty please because I want to know more! The suspense will kill me!

Reviewer: chaserchick4sirius
Date: 01/07/05 19:10
Chapter: It Began With a Kiss

Ahh! The suspense is killing me! i LOVE this kind of revenge!!!! PLEASE PLEASE update soon!

Reviewer: Hedwig22
Date: 01/06/05 18:43
Chapter: It Began With a Kiss

nvm i hadnt read it i had jus clicked it to see if there was another chapter and saw there was only one. Well anyways... Hurry up with the next chapter!

Reviewer: Hedwig22
Date: 01/06/05 18:41
Chapter: It Began With a Kiss

wat happened to chapter 2! its not there anymore!

Reviewer: TotallyClueless
Date: 12/31/04 21:04
Chapter: It Began With a Kiss

omg! you are my favorite fanfiction writer of all time. you rock! I'm off to read chapter 2...

Reviewer: chaserchick4sirius
Date: 12/31/04 11:27
Chapter: It Began With a Kiss

Great chapter! Love how Lily plans to get revenge ... Can't wait for Chapter 3!

Reviewer: Rain
Date: 12/30/04 17:16
Chapter: It Began With a Kiss

Wow! I really really like this. I love they way you have portrayed James as an arrogant self-cetered idiot by that way. Keep writting and post more soon!!

Reviewer: chaserchick4sirius
Date: 12/30/04 15:18
Chapter: It Began With a Kiss

Absolutely love it! Like the little suspense going on and have a great way of capturing James as an ... arrogant bullying toerag? lol

Reviewer: Hedwig22
Date: 12/30/04 8:22
Chapter: It Began With a Kiss

Awsome plot! Definitely going on faves too! Update sooon!

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