When are you updating???
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE Great story I love Lily/James stories with such fluff!
Very enjoyable. I really like the style. I think it works much better as a Lily/James than a Hr/D. Which one out of the Patil twins is Padma and Parvati's mother?
V.good. Not too cliche, an interesting twist. It showed James in a not so positive light, which is unusual and good because usually fics (especially J/L) Show him as a really sweet, nice caring person who doesn't pick on people. Just one typo though, there was a bit at the very end where it said 'this was the first ever time she would be mad at him' Don't you mean last?
Finally!!!! OMG that was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo goood!!! lol! Ok yeah i forgive you for taking forever with the second chapter but dont you dare do that again!!! i expect to have another one in two weeks at the latest! lol just kidding! but pleasse pleasse pleassssse dont keep me waiting that long again!!!!!!!
i was going back over the chapter and decided to ask a question: did you put Lucius in there for a specific reason, or did you just need a name? you don't have to answer, but i just felt like asking.
hehe ... that was definatly very ...... interesting. your one of the only authors i check on regularly. i'm just sorry i didn't get to read this chapter sooner.
This is the first Lily/James fic I've ever really gotten interested in. You've done it again. Can't wait for your update.
and here is another Queen of Serpents awesome, superb story wht can we say?where do u get these ideas?!
*Squee!* Absolutely loved it! And thank you for updating! Heh. I guess you can keep your face now. Anyways, brilliant story, I thought the way Potter looks after the kiss was amazingly well described! Thank you so much for this brill fic! ^^
Woah. Way awesome. Still left amazed here. Great job!!! Update!
Good story. Keep up the good work. I am looking forward to reading the rest...James and Lily, besides Hermione and Draco, are my favorite couple.
haha..i love Lily's whole "you must have been imagining it," lol classic. good luck with the award thingy!!:)
Brilliant! loved it! Update soon!
I've already reviewed once but I am here to tell you that if you do not update soon I will personally eat your face! xD Heh. But please update!!
Author's Response: actually I did sent a chapter up. I dunno why isn't not being validated though... if nothing works out by tomorrow I'll email one of the moderators. Don't eat my face just yet... I know it's yummy... but I like to leave that for Draco... Mmmm... and maybe James too.
YAY! thanks for the long reply! first time i got one! lol, but i really love you're story! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! well...i want to encourage you in some other way, but...there's just no other way to put it...so, GREAT JOB AND KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!
brilliant, perfect, wonderful, awesome, the list goes on.
i love it!wow, you're really good at writing kissing scenes lol..ahaha excellent!just what we all love, those raunchy sexual scenes lol:)anyways, update soon please!:)
Author's Response: LMAO. You like my kissing scenes? LoL, I never thought I'd hear the day. Thank you very much, indeed quite a compliment. I've been told my Non-con scenes were done with taste quite a few times but no one talked about the kisses. I feel special!! Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh and I do sex scenes too... too bad this site doesn't allow NC-17...
I'm new to this story and I really like it! Please update soon!
I really enjoyed reading your story!!! I hope to be able to read a new chapter soon!!!