Well? What are you waiting for? Update! ...please
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!! COME ON!!! U R TAKIN 4EVER!!!! Anyway, I like your story so far. PLEASE update soon!
Nice chapters :) It's getting quite interesting. I must say that block paragraphs (huge, long paragraphs) are hard to read online since it hurts the reader's eyes. Perhaps you can cut it down a bit?
When are you going to update? I'm dying here!
ARE YOU EVER GOING TO UPDATE? Hurry up, pretty pretty please with a cherry on top!
Damn girl you are awesome... I had a story in mind like this but then i came across this and read it.. Is Lily gonna kiss Sirius? that was what I was thinking.. Lily kissing Sirius in front of James after gittin all close! Update FAST and Im really really sorry about your grandpa!
All i can say is....WOW!!! You have totally got my attention. I love the way you portray James, it's all very...raw! PLEASe keep up the excellent work and update soon!
I'm soooo sorry about your grandpa. Your story is great. I think u are the only one to portray the "real" james potter. U have been able to show his arrogance exactly the way it is in the books and so far no author has been able to do that. I'm sure jkr would show james exactly the way u show him. congrats and good luck. update soon...................
Ooh, Lily is so evil! I really like your story, but I'm kind of missing old Snivelus. Is he gonna get a bit more important? Hurry up with updating.
Hey! Loved the way you portrayed James and Lily ... they were written to perfection ... you say you like reading L/J fics, any to recommend? Thanks :)
I know your pain, my grandfather died last month. I actually discovered this site the day before he passed. I'm addicted to it, checking for updates several times a day and read multiple fics at a time, 28 are bookmarked at the moment. Please try to update soon, Queen. And my condolences for your lost.
Sorry for your loss. I never met one of my grandpa's before her died, but I bet it's harder to actually have met him then lose him. Well anyways.... Lily is sooo evil in this story! haha! And yeah you have James down great though! Update ASAP!
i'm sorry. this plan is bound to fail ... that, and/or James is going to figure it out. UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~10~
Sorry about your loss! Lily's playing a very dangerous game! I love that of all places to meet... it was the pumpkin patch. So Potterlike! Well written!
Sorry about your Grandpa, my grandmother passed away recently and it can really throw you.. Anyway i'm still addicteds to this story, it's really good and on my faves list. Definately a ten.
I'm sooo sorry for your Grandpa. Anyway, your stories are really good. I don't know how you do it. Keep it up!
still addicted xoxo sarah
How do you do it? I just reread the story for the 5th time before reading this chapter, just so it would flow better and I knew exactly what was going, and it took me half an hour! I'm not a slow reader, but your story is sooooooo good I end up reading it slowly just so it will keep going for longer. Shame you can't rate stories higher than a ten...this would deserves more! Keep up the outstanding work!
fantastic, i read all ur fanfics, but can you PLEASE update?
Would you friggin update?