The chapter wasn't crap, I actually really enjoyed it. Sure, it was rather short, but it's ok. And I'll be sure to think up some kind of request....but I wanna make it really good.....hmmmm... Well, can't wait for more!
The chapter wasn't crap, I actually really enjoyed it. Sure, it was rather short, but it's ok. And I'll be sure to think up some kind of request....but I wanna make it really good.....hmmmm... Well, can't wait for more!
Wow!- your plot is something that keeps you interested, and i hope you continue adding to it-i dont have anything i would like to see at the moment, but ill keep thinking about it(i like that sugesstion by the way :D) I didnt think this chapter was crap, maybe not as interesting and hooking (and as long) as some of the other chapters, but i dont think that makes it crap. I like how you start your chapters, how it just kind of jumps in...but your readers not lost- Keep it up(and i await more chapters...soon hopefully)
Author's Response: Hmm...yeah I agree. Chapter 6 is going to be something like this. *is angry with self for making it not as good as the other chapters*
Wow!- your plot is something that keeps you interested, and i hope you continue adding to it-i dont have anything i would like to see at the moment, but ill keep thinking about it(i like that sugesstion by the way :D) I didnt think this chapter was crap, maybe not as interesting and hooking (and as long) as some of the other chapters, but i dont think that makes it crap. I like how you start your chapters, how it just kind of jumps in...but your readers not lost- Keep it up(and i await more chapters...soon hopefully)
Don't know how I managed to overlook this story :/ hmm... Anyway, great little scene in the beginning with Sirius and James. Seems like filler material though xD I'm sure it'll be used by the end eh? Great scene with the pumpkin patch. Honestly, will you have Lily kissing James in every chappie? not that I'm complaining ;) Update soon -MM
Great story, I love the whole revenge thing. Please update as soon as possible!
It's the most in character J/L fic I've ever read. Me loves it. Lol at the Wormtail killing us all thing. Also, in your story, Lily doesn't actually hate James, yay ... I've always disliked the way in so many J/L fics it's hate to love, coz I've never believed Lily hated him. Which Jo confirmed. Yay. Looking forward to updates, you rock.
i love this story! please hurry up and write chapter five before i go crazy (and we wouldnt want that to happen would we?)
I loved it!!! please hurry up with the next chapter
i LOVE this story! Totally lovin' your James by the way, nice balance between sex on legs and lily lover, and whatever you do please don't make him go all mushy. yuch! make chapters longer PLEASE!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!
What do you mean that chapter was crap?! I thought it was really good. Okay, admittedly it was slightly shorter than I normally would have liked, but seeing as I've had HBP to read it didnt matter so much. I love this idea of requesting stuff, though I think the naked Sirius coated in chocolate is a fab idea- i command you to use it! Something I would be interested to see- just for fun, would be if the Slytherins bet/dare the Marauders into doing something totally ridiculous, I can't think what but I'm sure you could. Well done on a good chappie and I hope you update faster for the next one! :) xxx Diamond Quillxxx
The story's amazing, so's the chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
Brilliant. i love this story!i can't wait for the next chapter!!
i've been waiting for you to update this for ages! i really love it, plzplzplz update some more!
How could you do this to me!!?? You leave it at a cliff-hanger ending!!!! Anyway, I love your story!! Pretty pretty please with ice cream, chocolate, straberry, and caramel syrup, and a cherry on top update SOON!!!!
How could you do this to me!!?? You leave it at a cliff-hanger ending!!!! Anyway, I love your story!! Pretty pretty please with ice cream, chocolate, straberry, and caramel syrup, and a cherry on top update SOON!!!!
Cute :) Can't wait to see what Lily's in for now... I'm sure James will gain control of her little game anyway. Update soon
I thought this story was great! please write some more
