I loved it!!!!! Speechless I am. This story is awsm(awesom)!
QUEEN OF SERPENTS
I love this story! And I rarely, I mean rarely find a story that is captivating. I am so hooked, I will re-read my favorite sections, just to be part of the moment you created in your story. BUT I'm frustrated that you havn't updated in a long long time. I hope you are not abandoning your story because you feel it is no good. Well I beg to differ it is awesome!!! I is truly one of the best fanfictions I have read in a long time. I beg of you PLEASE, update with another juicy chapter. And if you need any more encouragement or ideas feel free to email me.
sausysass@yahoo.com
-SIMPLYDESIRES
This chapter was most definatly not crap! It was probably one of my favorites along with the other 3 (lol)...but I definatly love the 'game' Lily's playing at...it makes me want to try it out sometime. Please keep up teh updates because i'm constantly being drawn into the story, wondering whats going to happen next.
HEY.. well.. rereading the story.. because its on my favorites list.. and its okay.. NO iTS AWESOME!! so i really suggest you update soon, cause theres a lot of people who love it, you no.. so yeah.. UPDATE SOON!! =)
next chapter? NEXT CHAPTER?!?! IT WOULD BE GOOD IF THERE WAS A NEXT CHAPTER!!!
Wow! You are an awsome writer. The way you have the shift in power constantly shifting between James and Lily is really sneaky and amusing. Everything has been so interestign so far and I can't stop myself from wondering...what happens next? whats the deal with slughorns party? and...Whose going to have the upperhand this time around??? Please updaet soon, I noticed that it usually takes you a while but please hurry, all of your adoring fans are waiting for chpt 6!!
next chapter? NEXT CHAPTER?!?! IT WOULD BE GOOD IF THERE WAS A NEXT CHAPTER!!!
i have been reading this ever since it was first published and the waits are excruciating, but i LOVE it anyway!! please, please, please update soon, i don't think my sanity can hold up much longer!!!
oOo hurry!! lol jpjp take your time, great job..
Hey, the chapter was fine, don't worry about it! True, not a ton happened, but these kinds of things are necessary to make the really juicy chapters special, right? Lol. Great job! You're in my favorites.
please update!!!!!!! im begging u!!!!
UPDATE!!!! please!!! im down on hands and knees!!!! luv the story but i would like you to... oh i dunno.....FINISH!!!!
sirus in chocolate? nice idea! but can we have james flying up to lily in the bnext qudditch match and kissing her while hes still on his broom. That would be so romantic. (then maybe gets hit by a bludger up the back of the broom causing him to fall into lily?)
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(ok think i've made my point lol) Chelsea xx
