I think that you have captured Ron and Angelina well, and I love stories that take missing moments. We know that Ron tried to resign and that Angelina wouldn't let him. The conversation was a nice idea for a fic.
I like that Angelina had seen him practise and knew what he was capable of when he wasn't nervous.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed the story. I just like to think that the two had some type of relationship, you know, Captain and Keeper wise. It was just something I wanted to express.rnrnThanks for the review. =D
I loved it--it captured Ron's personality very well. The only part I thought wsa out of character was what he was doing with Angelina; "it comes and goes," he said. But maybe that's just me.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. This is actually the first story were I have written about so I'm sure he does seem off here and there, thank you for pointing it out. =D