Very nice and cute!
It was amazing! I really liked that you mentioned Sirius in the end, that was clever!!!
~Passion For Prongs
ORIGINAL AND SWEET
Awww!!!! That was really cute!
HAHA the ending was GREAT. This was a wonderful story but hurry soon to finish the curtain call. DYING to read it!
And I remeber Sirius Black... :)
i want to know what happen to sirius
brilliant. like woah! i just love James. that's exactly the way I picture James and Lily in my potter-world.
omg...i will definetly let you have more time...take all the time that you want! i loved it from the first words about the twins to the last sentence about the sexy sirius black! and violet's right! james is soooooooooooooo cute and innocent because he didn't understand lily. i like how you made him like that and not confident like other people do. i like both ways but its just so....real this way. i mean like raw and so utterly romantic! oh god your a GREAT writer! i can't wait for more for curtain call. BUT take time like it was candy at a sale at honeydukes or james potter on a hot day with no shirt on....mmmmm ok so enough blabbering from me and once again GREAT WONDERFUL JOB!!!
Aww... man. This was so friggin' sweet. =D
ah, cute. :) i could just imagine james getting all stuttery and mumbly. :)
This was a great story.
I loved the way you ended this story. Sirius Black! The possibilities... Anyway, this was such a sweet story. The only thing I found slightly questionable was that although Lily said that she loved James, she acted like their going to live together wasn't a possibility at all. Other than that, it was just so amazingly sweet and I enjoyed every bit of this one-shot. (:
Haha, cute. I love that this was the portrait's perspective. Nice one-shot!
that was soooooooooo good!! Yes, i do in fact remember Sirius Black, now tell me his story!!
one billion stars :D
i dare you to write the sirius one
that was INCREDIBLE
it flowed so well
and the writing was fabulous
and the idea is so cute and awesome