Reviewer: dani123
Date: 07/07/08 11:53
Chapter: A Tribute To Severus

Aww, that was so good! Great job on this poem! :D

Reviewer: Ren Shire
Date: 06/21/08 21:36
Chapter: A Tribute To Severus

coolio! the only thing i would say for constructive critisizm is to make it "flow" a little more. but its great the way it is anyway! good job!!!!

Author's Response: Definitely! Thank you! Next time, I will try my best to make it *flow* a bit more. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: sam_1034_lily
Date: 06/21/08 12:13
Chapter: A Tribute To Severus

wow i luved it da last part was ma fav u hav dun a really gud job

Author's Response: *beams* Thank you very much, that was my favorite too.

Reviewer: eva_writes
Date: 06/20/08 17:30
Chapter: A Tribute To Severus

i luv this poem so much, and you really do have to feel sorry for snape. he loved her so much, and she was all he ever wanted. james potter got everything he ever wanted, including lily. i'm not saying tht i don't support james/lily, i really do, but it's really unfair. :(

Author's Response: Thank you. =] Yeah, I always knew he was the good guy, it's just that I never liked the guy. I actually cried when he died, though-JKR wrote that page extremely well.

Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4
Date: 06/20/08 17:19
Chapter: A Tribute To Severus

This was awesome! And I read your review to Fear by lalalalatina. Chai coffee or tea is actually very good. If you ever see a Dutch Apple Chai, I strongly recommend it. My favorite part of this is:

He gave his love for her to plant.
He gave his hand so she could stand.
He gave his shoulder so she might cry.
He gave his mind for her insight.
He gave his heart. She died.
^^This was really touching. I lovvvvvved it!! *still hyper from the chai* You are a great poet!!!!!!!!! {BeccA!!!!!!!!!}

Author's Response: *grins* Thanks. I do adore chai tea, don't you? I prefer vanilla chai to spiced. And I will look out for that Dutch Apple chai, thanks.rnAnd thank you for quoting me. *grins again* Everyone likes praise.

Reviewer: ink_daughter
Date: 06/20/08 16:19
Chapter: A Tribute To Severus

This was really good! I'm a novice poem writer myself, I'd rather get constructive criticism than give it. ;)

Author's Response: Yeah, but I'd rather still get criticized, even if by a novice, because the novice, as a reader, acts as a second oppinion to the author, as the author can never truly see their own work with clarity.

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 06/20/08 13:49
Chapter: A Tribute To Severus

*snif* u have to feel bad for snape *sniff* good poem!

Author's Response: *sob tear cry* Yes I know. *pulls out KleenexTM* That'!!!!!! We're crying buddies now! Thanks for the review, crying buddy.

Reviewer: priti
Date: 06/20/08 13:34
Chapter: A Tribute To Severus

An awesome fic

Author's Response: Thanks

You must login (register) to review.
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.

We have stories and authors in this archive.


Choose Theme:
Not From Others by FloreatCastellum 6th-7th Years
She may not have been able to join Harry, Ron and Hermione, but Ginny refuses...
A Seer Named Rosemary Snape by PlutoLovegood 1st-2nd Years
In 2018 Neville and Harry deliver a Hogwarts acceptance letter to Rosemary Snape...
Gelido Dormitabis (An Icy Slumber) by Nagini Riddle 3rd-5th Years
A poetic look at the oppressive sleep of the Inferi within the icy cave.Written...
A Christmas Choice by coolh5000 3rd-5th Years
After working late one Christmas Eve and missing yet another day out with his...
Winter at the Castle by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
The winter solstice, the shortest, harshest days of the year. Would you have...
A Passing Fancy by HalfASlug 1st-2nd Years
The Yule Ball is on the horizon and Neville knows only one girl that he wants...
Four Christmases by Squibstress 6th-7th Years
Minerva attempts to teach Severus Occlumency and perhaps something more.