Reviews For Serendipity
Reviewer: Accio Goblet
Date: 08/03/11 12:25
Chapter: Stagger

Oh man, oh man. It's a cliffhanger. You are SO bad.

Reviewer: To_Be_A_Ravenclaw
Date: 05/25/11 6:20
Chapter: Stagger

Malfoy BETTER get what he deserves. And more.

Reviewer: brisbanelions
Date: 09/23/09 4:50
Chapter: Stagger

looovvveee it :)

Reviewer: Breakiing Dawn
Date: 09/03/08 12:44
Chapter: Stagger

I want to know who that person is, so you need to get the next chapter up.

Author's Response: Lols, well it is in the queue. Glad you enjoyed it! :P

Reviewer: Dill
Date: 09/01/08 14:37
Chapter: Stagger

I love it! Would it be so hard to just send me ever chapter you've written? XD

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Kim! I would but you see that would wreck the suspense for you. :P The fifth chapter is in the queue!

Reviewer: sam_1034_lily
Date: 09/01/08 13:35
Chapter: Stagger

dis was really great cant wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Thank you so much. The next chapter is in the queue.

Reviewer: Claudia M
Date: 08/29/08 21:27
Chapter: The Beginning of the End

i love the way you write :)
like wow i CANNOT wait to
plezz plezz keep going its fantastic

Author's Response: thanks, claud!

Reviewer: K_Bella
Date: 07/30/08 11:42
Chapter: Pain

when is the next chapter coming out?!?!?!
that's a cliff hanger.!

Author's Response: The next chapter should be out by the end of August. Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: K_Bella
Date: 07/30/08 10:47
Chapter: The Beginning of the End


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: K_Bella
Date: 07/30/08 10:47
Chapter: The Beginning of the End


Reviewer: sam_1034_lily
Date: 07/08/08 18:08
Chapter: My World, Your World, Our World

wow i really liked it a lot but just one thing its really unlikely of hermione to leave moody when voldemort was dere she would fight along wid moody but apart from dat i absolutely luved it update soon

Author's Response: Thank you! I will update soon!

Reviewer: la_vie_boheme
Date: 07/07/08 13:00
Chapter: The Beginning of the End

Just catching up on reviewing that I should have done before.
I really like how you portrayed Ron and Hermione together, with hermione's usual insecurity, despite her obvious brilliance. Her little blush also shows some tentativeness, which I think will work all the better when you start to work other aspects of the plot in.
Couple little things I noticed, the time should be written out instead of being a number. Also, it looks like there's an extra space here, "Hermione passed through the Security Desk, after presenting her wand for checking to the wizard behind it , and walked into the first elevator. " Right between it and the comma.
Looking forward to more from this fic,

Author's Response: Thank you for your comments. :) I fixed the space.

Reviewer: EmmaW16
Date: 06/30/08 17:26
Chapter: The Beginning of the End

I'm under 17 but i like it

By the way Wayyyyy under 17

Author's Response: Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: youfun
Date: 06/29/08 4:55
Chapter: The Beginning of the End

i dont mean to be critical but in your first lines when you said Voldemort used the petrificus totalus on Hermione would Voldemort ever even use the petrificus totalus?? i mean wouldnt he just kill her or torture her and when you said he yelled HERMIONE GRANGER i dont think he would say it i mean he would just say GRANGER or that a mudblood was spying on them dont you think?

Author's Response: Yes, I understand what you are saying, but in the next few chapters you will find out why Voldemort was so intrested in Hermione. As for his use of "petrificus totalus", it was because he didn't want to torture her just yet, but he did afterwards as you saw. rnrnThank you for taking the time to review my story, I hope you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: sam_1034_lily
Date: 06/25/08 19:44
Chapter: The Beginning of the End

oh cant wait for more gud job

Author's Response: Thank you!

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