yay! i like this story, please update!
Author's Response: i just sent in the new chappie, it's very... haha you'll see.
bryan needs to go back to Egypt! cool fic so far - update soon!
Author's Response: lol thanx! as i've said before, I based him off someone I know. someone i hate. ALOT
Author's Response: thaaaaaaaaaaanks!!
wow this is fab! very funny too! Update soon I can't wait to read more! Can't wait for Lily and James to get together! But ooo Bryan doesn't sound like good news..update soon! xxx
Author's Response: lol trust he's not. he's a meanie weenie boperinee!
wow! great story so far!!!!!!!!!!!! update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: i wish my validater person would validate it. i keep getting rejected. *sobs* I don't like being rejected!!!!
great story, but you need to get the ex OUT OF LILY'S LIFE!!! AHHHH!
Author's Response: lol i hate bryan so much...i based him off someone i know who will remain nameless... : )
the ex is back!*duh duh duhhhh* haha i love this story!well done!*claps* update soon please!:)
Author's Response: lol i love enthusiasum like this!
I need to know what is SHOCKING!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
Author's Response: i'm trying, i keep getting rejected. GRR lol tune in tho!
shocking? shocking is good!!! * grins evily and laughes evily*
Author's Response: lol who doesn't love a bit of shocking surprises here and there?
she didnt make it? SHE DIDNT MAKE IT!?!?!? why, whyyyyy?????? im so sad for her
Author's Response: sorry, this is a bit of a sad story. wait till you see the next chapter. it's very sad.
AW! I was sad that Lily didn't make the team, but it was still a great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: thanx, i know, we are all sad for Lily. *sob*
Author's Response: thanx dude!
I loved this chapter! Can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: thanx. i'm trying to get the next chapter done really soon, since I'm home for the day. grr i hate having a fever.
good chapter update soon
Author's Response: thanx alot! = )
This is a great and fantastical story i loved when Lily said that it was her against a marauder and that she was loosing you have to update soon and continue the story i will be crushed it you discontinued it
Author's Response: don't worry, i'm continueing and I updated. i sent in chapter six and chapter seven should be on the way!
dude dude! omg!!!! they snogged!!! eeeeeeeeeekkkk! i cant believe it! you made a great story greater by a kiss! i love you! ukmmmm get the nxt chapter out or ill cry!
Author's Response: ooie don't cry! chapter five is finally up! lol thankz
Wow!! Fantastic story. One of the best ones I've ever read, and I've read a quite a few. Update as soon as you can, please. Great job.
Author's Response: that's very sweet, but i am sorry to say i may be discontinuing this story. it all depends on whether or not my laptop is fixed.
absolutly brilliant...............what else can i say
Author's Response: wow, thank you so much. please read the author's review, it is very important. thanks again!
AUTHOR'S IMPORTANT MESSAGE! ALL READERS PLEASE READ THIS NOW! ok, now that i hope i have your attention... I am totally pissed at my laptop (where I keep all of my stories) right now. it won't turn on!! so, I have to wait for my father to come home from New Hampshire today to see if he can fix it. BUT he won't be able to fix it untill Thursday because I have band practice from 3-8 right after school, so it might be a couple of days until I can send the next chapter again. thanks again for your reviews! ***ColorsOfTheWind***
im seriously grinning from ear to ear!hahaha that was awesome!next chapter please!!:)
Author's Response: lol thanks so so much! please read the author's review at the top, it's VERY important! B )