Reviewer: Emiella
Date: 05/29/05 8:32
Chapter: Shocks that Reveal the Truth

it's soooooooooooo great!! please please keep writing!! i hope this Bryan will go away

Author's Response: i will, don't worry...and bryan is readii to leave yet!! *mwah hahahahhahha*

Reviewer: lupin rules
Date: 05/23/05 19:41
Chapter: Shocks that Reveal the Truth

Absolutely love it. Please update soon.

Author's Response: thank you soo much! you guys make me feel so good!

Reviewer: missblack
Date: 04/16/05 20:20
Chapter: Shocks that Reveal the Truth

any chance of an update soon? You're doing really well and im looking forward to the next chapter:D

Author's Response: thanx sooo much and yes, i'll update either sunday or monday

Reviewer: niti_yary
Date: 03/28/05 22:22
Chapter: Shocks that Reveal the Truth

this is brilliant!! i love the end "Lily, i love you", i want to cry (because of the emotions). hehe, please post the next chapter soon!!! i'm getting crazy... :D

Author's Response: yay! the login problems are solved and I'll be able to update soon! you all probably hate me right about now... lol

Reviewer: hermionelily
Date: 03/21/05 15:33
Chapter: Shocks that Reveal the Truth

Wonderful story! So, what's up with this Byran White figure? Am I right to not trust him, or just too much of a Lily & James fan?

Author's Response: DO NOT trust bryan white. he's bad news. u find out in either chapter nine or ten, I can't remember. and after all of that bad stuff happens, I'm going to explain to you all how the idea of Bryan White came to me and where all of the emotions came off. (hinthintmylifehinthint)

Reviewer: Flgirl4life
Date: 03/19/05 19:49
Chapter: Shocks that Reveal the Truth

You warned us that there might me a little cliffie, but this cliffie is the size of the Grand Caynon! Please update really soon!!!

Author's Response: Lol. I sent in chapter eight! do not fear! : ) I also sent int 2 one shots and a new story. i hope they don't gert rejected! : D

Reviewer: Lexy Granger
Date: 03/18/05 16:49
Chapter: Shocks that Reveal the Truth

'Lily took a deep breath and felt herself moving closer to James. His warm breath was caressing her face and she felt a wave of dizziness sweep over her. She was aboluetly sure they were going to kiss when there was a shout. "OY PRONGS, YOU'RE GOING TO BE LATE FOR POTIONS IF YOU DON'T MOVE!!!"' Sirius has to ruin everything doesn't he! Oh well, please UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)

Author's Response: lol we all love sirius anyways. since that was my tenth review for this chapter, i'm going to send in the next chapter today. thanx!

Reviewer: Siri_luver
Date: 03/17/05 19:11
Chapter: Shocks that Reveal the Truth

WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT!!!!! oh well, i'll be fine as long as you update sooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: LOL. it's all for the plot line, folks. but, if you're mad about this, then you'll be fuming when you find out what bryan does to lily... dun dun DUN

Reviewer: irishphoenix
Date: 03/16/05 18:39
Chapter: Shocks that Reveal the Truth

YOU'RE EVIL! how dare you end it like that?!?!?!?!?! there was no favorite part, i liked it all!

Author's Response: aww thanx, dude! : ) the next chapter isn't very happy, nor is the ones coming up. I hope you guys stampede me or something when u find out how evil I am to Lily.. or should I say how evil Bryan is? Mwah ha ha ha ha ha haaaaa!

Reviewer: Prongs
Date: 03/16/05 17:24
Chapter: Shocks that Reveal the Truth

"Lily?" "Just go away, Potter!" Lily cried, her voice muffled. James felt his heart fall. "So we kiss and now it's Potter again?" he said coldly. Lily sighed. "I'm sorry, James, I just so damn confused," she said, lifting her head from the arm of the armchair. James sat down next to her. "Can I tell you something?" James asked slowly. Lily nodded. "Lily Evans, I love you." that was my fav part. u left it at such a cliff hanger no!!!! I was suspecting that u were gonna kill off Nidale actually and i was rite! I really hate that bryan guy he bugs me lily and james are gettin along great now, but he shows up and ruins everything! I can't wait till u update again!!!

Author's Response: LOL I'm going to update as soon as I can. I absolutely LOVE the next chapter.. i cried while I was writing it. You may not cry because you might not have any emotional attachments to some of the things I put in it, but I sure did! : )

Reviewer: missblack
Date: 03/16/05 16:45
Chapter: Shocks that Reveal the Truth

"Can I tell you something?" James asked slowly. Lily nodded. "Lily Evans, I love you." aww i love it!!it was short but good! im so glad the chapter finally got posted:) im looking forward to more info on Brian..maybe he can die!lol, wow, im a little evil.

Author's Response: he doesn't die but he does baaaad things to Lily. When those chapters get posted, you all are going to hate me! mwah hahahahaha

Reviewer: caren_the_hpfan
Date: 03/15/05 23:49
Chapter: Shocks that Reveal the Truth

Nidale?! What were you thinking? Haha, just kidding, but this is a short but good chapter bringing James and Lily together. However, the scene with James and Snape sort-of fighting needs more tension. It was almost like, "Oh. Snape got punched? Where?" Build it up and pour in lots of emotion! Other than that, it was way cool! Good job!

Author's Response: sorry about that, that part was just a fill in for a part i had to take out in order for it to be accepted. i'm not that good at writing fight scenes because the most fighting I've done is swearing across the hallway at the boy I based Bryan White off of.

Reviewer: jj_hp_kim_snowy
Date: 03/15/05 20:34
Chapter: Shocks that Reveal the Truth

OMG! this fic is sooooo great! plz update soon!

Author's Response: much thanx, dude! I'm gonna update on wednesday..o wait, that's today..okay, I'm going to send in the next chapter today! :-)

Reviewer: Tap
Date: 03/15/05 17:11
Chapter: Shocks that Reveal the Truth

NIDALE! NOOOO! *huggles Lilykins* It'll be alright, don't cry! YAY JAMES! Maybe they'll start dating, at least he finally told her. hehe, me luffeh!

Author's Response: Lol, not yet. actually not for a while. Nidale is actually one of my friends in real life. she got kinda mad when she found out i killed her off. but, it's all for the plot line! :-)

Reviewer: Dee Fleur
Date: 03/15/05 16:18
Chapter: Shocks that Reveal the Truth

Awww, that's really sad about Nidale... other then that, it was a really cute chapter. I love James, he's really sweet in this fic. Keep on writing and please update soon!

Author's Response: thanx. i love the thought of a sweet, caring james. its hard for me to write him other wise.

Reviewer: Flame girl
Date: 03/15/05 13:25
Chapter: Shocks that Reveal the Truth

Oooh! I'm so glad your chapter was acepted. It's rubbish when it gets rejected but after two or three times I don't have the heart to continue. Glad you do though! Great chapter but I read so many different fics I think I need to read it all again to get the best of the fic :) *10*

Author's Response: IT WAS ACCEPTED! I AM SOOO HAPPY! its actuallypretty lucky they accepted, cuz i f they didn't this time, i would have stopped trying and just post everything on!

Author's Response: i'm happy, but i'm sad at the same time. no, let me rephrase that, I happy but MAD at the same time. I ecstatic that the chapter got accepted, but in school, the only reason i didn't get high honor roll is because MR. DEMARCO MY TECH ED TEACHER AT THE LINDEN SCHOOL GAVE ME A B+! GGGRRRRRRRRRR I totally exploded in front of the whole homeroom and a girl in my class had to go down and warn my mother that i was very angry. lol

Reviewer: Prongs
Date: 03/12/05 14:07
Chapter: Quiddich Try-outs

AHHH i want to know what happens with the White kid hurry and update!!!

Author's Response: i'll give you this--bryan white is the worst thing that could happen to lily. mwah ha ha ha ha ha haa!

Reviewer: Winky
Date: 03/12/05 13:06
Chapter: Flip Flops and Shocks

I know that quote, the one Chris Rock made... I love Eminem too, and the Black Eyed Peas!! I totally have that song memorized, the one of Slim Shaddy, yup yup!! Well anyway, just wanted to say that ur story is so cool, has me hooked up!!! Love it, especially how ur making Lily fall for James, most ppl just do everything in one chapter, and then they just go making up the story as they go!! Well bye, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: I LOVE EMINEM SOOO MUCH! i just got his cd and it is SO awesome! i hav the black eyed peas cd too, its much jazzier than i thought it would be, but i really like it. thanx so much, dude! ROCK ON

Reviewer: Tap
Date: 03/11/05 19:31
Chapter: Quiddich Try-outs

Great story! I love it, keep it going! There was a mistake I had caught, but I don't remember what it was! It's great anyway, keep 'em coming!:D

Author's Response: lol i have such a bad memory, its terrible! and i make a lot of mistakes, its probably in grammar. grammar is TOTALLY not my best subject. :-)

Reviewer: Flame girl
Date: 03/10/05 16:18
Chapter: One Simple Word

Nooooooo! Your mod can't hate you, I need a new chapter! These are my dearest pleas to your mod, Dear god, post the new chapter, we love the fic and can't wait anymore!! Please, Flame girl And to you, the author, keep up the great work, the fic is excellent, can't wait for the new chapter. One day.... hopefully soon! :)

Author's Response: LOL thanx.. hopefully, she'll accept it. i'm on chapter thirteen. i had to delete a lot of chapter seven and change a lot and i'm hoping it will work! i'm going to put a deleted scenes chapter at the end, tho, so ya'll can see the stuff i took out.

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