Reviewer: Sweet Lily
Date: 12/05/09 20:02
Chapter: Shocks that Reveal the Truth

ooooh please continue updating soon! i can't believe Nidale's dead! I completely understand your reasons, though. I cna't wait to see what happens with Bryan and Lily!

Reviewer: RowenaHeart
Date: 03/02/08 13:35
Chapter: Shocks that Reveal the Truth

:-(

Reviewer: RowenaHeart
Date: 03/02/08 11:57
Chapter: One Simple Word

"sobbingly" isn't a word

Reviewer: Dazed_And_Abused
Date: 02/23/08 11:43
Chapter: Shocks that Reveal the Truth

forstly, i'd just like to say great job, give it a year and you'll be like an online j.k. rowling. seriously. (not you sirius). i can't tell you my favourite part of the chapter, or even the story, cause i love it ALL. your really amazing. even if this is only 7 chap. long at the moment. keep it up.

Reviewer: Marauderessa
Date: 12/25/07 23:22
Chapter: Shocks that Reveal the Truth

nice plot! and a prank. and when they're going out..make one of them "cheat" on each other. twist the plot. make it unpredictable. like the dark lord.

Reviewer: Marauderessa
Date: 12/25/07 22:47
Chapter: Heads Over Heels... Litterally

loved it!

Reviewer: Wendelin the Weirder
Date: 11/04/07 14:10
Chapter: Shocks that Reveal the Truth

OMG!!!! I love this story!!!! It is soooo cool! I have just gotten into Lily/James and I must say, I like your style of writing the best so far! Keep going!

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 09/29/07 16:07
Chapter: Shocks that Reveal the Truth

I love James' reaction to White!!!!! So funny! anyway, keep going, I like it !
P.S. Could you pleeeeeeeeeese let them finally go out? Come on, have a heart!

Reviewer: trulylily
Date: 09/15/07 15:23
Chapter: One Simple Word

I love it! You should add more! I am so putting you as an author on my favorites list and your story on my favorites list! Hope you add more soon! :)

Reviewer: boekenwurm
Date: 08/22/07 3:46
Chapter: Shocks that Reveal the Truth

can't wait untill the next chapter.

Reviewer: JJ876
Date: 06/03/07 23:50
Chapter: Shocks that Reveal the Truth

PLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSAA POST THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! I CAN'T WAIT!!!!

Reviewer: zonkoslover
Date: 04/04/07 21:24
Chapter: Shocks that Reveal the Truth

Wow! this was an amzing"chappie"! I love the end where lily's like im confused and then james is like Lily evans i love you! i really liked this part cuz its like telling the reader that the one thing lily can never be confused about is james not liking her! so good job!

Reviewer: lily princess
Date: 03/19/07 21:46
Chapter: Shocks that Reveal the Truth

update soon!!!!!!

Reviewer: xProngsxx4evax
Date: 02/15/07 18:15
Chapter: Shocks that Reveal the Truth

I really like this story; you are a very good writer. I started laughing out loud at the Truth or Dare part.

Reviewer: California
Date: 09/01/06 11:33
Chapter: Shocks that Reveal the Truth

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE

Reviewer: witchwriter113
Date: 06/10/06 15:55
Chapter: Truth or Dare?

I luv this story! Dont discontinue!

Reviewer: witchwriter113
Date: 06/10/06 15:29
Chapter: Heads Over Heels... Litterally

Luved it!

Reviewer: witchwriter113
Date: 06/10/06 14:38
Chapter: One Simple Word

*sigh*

poor lily

poor nidale

poor rochelle

Reviewer: Blackat_hrt
Date: 05/26/06 18:06
Chapter: Shocks that Reveal the Truth

I love it! especially bryan. it gives james even more obsticles to overcome, and makes lily's love for him more real. Two thumbs way up!!!

Reviewer: mini_marauder
Date: 05/11/06 19:08
Chapter: Shocks that Reveal the Truth

OMG! you cannot stop there!!!!!! if you dont update soon ill go CRAZY!! plz update fast!!!!!!!!!! faster faster faster!!!!!!

Author's Response: i wish i could update, but my entire file was deleted, it was on my laptop and that was destroyed >_< im so mad!

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