Reviews For The One Miracle
Reviewer: thismafer
Date: 06/17/08 20:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

LOL the ending was really funny please continue this !! it was really and intense discussion i can picture it lily getting all worried and sick of james being at war does this has any relation with the story I love you this much?? are they related?? well .. anyway great story!!

Author's Response: The ending was fun, wasn't it? I'm glad you liked it -- and the whole story, too! Once I've finished some of my current WIPs, I hope to write either a continuation of this one-shot of a chaptered story similar to it, but for now this'll be a stand alone. As for being related to I Love You This Much -- it could be; at no point do they disagree, and I suppose in my head they go together, but they were both intended to be read on their own. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Passion For Prongs
Date: 06/17/08 19:49
Chapter: Chapter 1

At first I thought they were actually going to divorce! They were fighting like maniacs! But I'm glad there was a make-up...and that there was that little blurb about pregnancy...hehehe, perhaps Harry was cerated that night????

~Passion For Prongs

Author's Response: Nah, I could never have them actually divorce -- they're too perfect together! (And it's not canon . . . as far as we know.) But I'm glad the fighting was intense! Perhaps Harry was created that night, indeed ;) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: i love prongs
Date: 06/17/08 15:40
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow! that was fantastic! i think you really captured a side to lily and james potters relationship that actually could have occured. this story really contrasts with other james/lily stories where they are usually all happy love up and the war doesnt seem to affect the them. well done!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you think so!

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 06/17/08 14:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

this was awesome. i loved it. it was real. this could have happened. i loved the ending it was cute lol! while they were shouting i was close to crying it was intense.
your right there arent many war lily/james fics. you should continue on with this. (if u ever finish ur other stories lol sicne i read all of them lol)

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it and thought it could have happened! After writing something so intense, I liked tacking on a little something cute at the end ;)

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 06/17/08 14:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

this was awesome. i loved it. it was real. this could have happened. i loved the ending it was cute lol! while they were shouting i was close to crying it was intense.
your right there arent many war lily/james fics. you should continue on with this. (if u ever finish ur other stories lol sicne i read all of them lol)

Reviewer: SiriusPotterFan1
Date: 06/17/08 13:15
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hahah, the ending made me smile. :)

Author's Response: Good!

Reviewer: Gin_Wazlib
Date: 06/17/08 11:50
Chapter: Chapter 1

Cute ending. I liked it. I'm a big fan of writing James and Lily fighting when their married, because, hey, it happens. Nice work!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, Harry's a very passionate character, so it would make sense that his parents are, too! :)

Reviewer: junior_achievement
Date: 06/17/08 11:31
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was really nice! I think you captured James and Lily perfectly. It feels like this sort of thing would really happen to them, but they would always be able to right it in the end.

Wonderful job =)

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you think so!

Reviewer: Calico
Date: 06/17/08 9:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

This story was a lot more realistic than a lot I've read, because it was honest. Obviously Lily and James would have fought, even though they loved each other, and even though it's painful to read, it's also nice to know that even they were only human. I think your best line was "Lily was his religion, and there is nothing worse than losing faith." It was really beautifully thought out. I think I'll go a read some of your other stories now. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! As much as I love them (despite that they're fictional!) they were only human, and going through what they went through, you're right -- they were bound to fight. I'm glad you liked it! :)

Reviewer: elderwand17
Date: 06/17/08 7:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

just like your other stories, this one is awesome too=)

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

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