Oh my gosh. This is very touching. It really makes me wonder what the HP story would be if Lily and James hadn't been killed...but then again, there wouldn't be a story. Wonderful job! ~MJ
Author's Response: thank you very much! Yes I like to think that Harry would have had a fairly normal life if his parents had survived. I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review.
The scene where it shows Harry kneeling over his parents graves is so sad, especially as we know what happens to Lily and James.
Lily and James fighting over the simplest things is very realistic. They love each other but are under a lot of stress and take it out on each other.
"If this child was going to be anything like James, she could use some more divine intervention." I love this line. It adds some humour to the fic, and Lily would definalty need all the help she could get raising a mini maurader.
In short I like this fic.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you for the review! I'm glad you liked it! I tried to keep it as realistic as possible.
Oh, wow! That is a really good story. It's so nice to see Lily as a human, with flaws and strengths. You did a really good job. I like how her kneeling over her mother's grave mirrors Harry doing that, but I like how she found hope in knowing they were still there and a part of her to counterpoint Harry's despair of thinking they were gone forever. So well written. WRITE MORE!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I'm trying to work out James' side to this time in their life next, so keep an eye out for that! Thank you again for reviewing!
Very good! Very poignant and touching. I hate to think that Lily and James fought, but I think you're right: that their personalities and the stress they were under would have made it inevitable. Well written!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review! I hate to think of Lily and James fighting too, however I have enough of my own experience being married to know that any stress may make you fight with the one you love most. And Lily and James had much more to be getting on with! Anyway, I'm glad you liked it! Thank you again.
Very good! Very poignant and touching. I hate to think that Lily and James fought, but I think you're right: that their personalities and the stress they were under would have made it inevitable. Well written!
