Reviewer: Spottedsunshine
Date: 04/24/11 9:06
Chapter: Chapter 1

I like it! Wish there was more, but that's okay!

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 03/26/10 19:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was incredible. I love to believe that Severus lives in some remote place, unknown to anyone else but the person he loves. The thought of a relaxing warm climate makes it even better--even if it gets to 40 degrees. Heck, that's warm to me. I loved this story.

Reviewer: heartnut
Date: 09/02/09 14:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

Absolutely spiffy. I love this. You've written everything perfectly, and the actual facts to go with it are so interesting! Perfect spot for them!

Reviewer: silent_heartbeat
Date: 06/11/08 17:21
Chapter: Chapter 1

War Voldemort II. Nice name for it. And I like the "island getaway" idea. It does seem like somewhere someone would go if they just "died" in a war. I know I would! lol.
Just lovely.^_^

S_H

Reviewer: sinbad
Date: 06/09/08 20:41
Chapter: Chapter 1

I love the island theory. Nice little story.

Reviewer: Nostalgic128
Date: 06/09/08 20:36
Chapter: Chapter 1

this story is so powerful, I love it!

Reviewer: HermionePotter
Date: 06/09/08 14:26
Chapter: Chapter 1

I loved it! A bit short, but still enjoyable. I have to say, the way you write Hermione/Severus has really grown on me. I've even gotten to referring to him by his first name, instead of the way I grew up. I look forward to your next story!

~zimmy

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 06/09/08 12:24
Chapter: Chapter 1

Well, the way you described Severus' attire, or lack thereof, I figured it had to be someplace remote.
It was a great location, and I kind of thought the two of them were going to like, hangout there, and realax, but I guess there's no place like home.
Great story, again, and thanks for your great tales, You are the best!!

Reviewer: Love_Snape
Date: 06/09/08 11:31
Chapter: Chapter 1

Your a very busy writer and a good one.
Ana

Reviewer: claymor
Date: 06/09/08 8:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

Much enjoyed. I usually do enjoy your stories...much. Seems like it should be longer than one chap though. Maybe just wishful thinking.

Reviewer: beautyfades
Date: 06/09/08 7:39
Chapter: Chapter 1

Absolutely touching. You did an excellent job of envoking their emotions of need and longing upon us readers, and even though I was doubtful what someone could do in 700+ words at first, you fulfilled those emotions quite nicely. Another great story to enjoy by Subversa.

~Beauty Fades

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