I like it! Wish there was more, but that's okay!
That was incredible. I love to believe that Severus lives in some remote place, unknown to anyone else but the person he loves. The thought of a relaxing warm climate makes it even better--even if it gets to 40 degrees. Heck, that's warm to me. I loved this story.
Absolutely spiffy. I love this. You've written everything perfectly, and the actual facts to go with it are so interesting! Perfect spot for them!
War Voldemort II. Nice name for it. And I like the "island getaway" idea. It does seem like somewhere someone would go if they just "died" in a war. I know I would! lol.
I love the island theory. Nice little story.
this story is so powerful, I love it!
I loved it! A bit short, but still enjoyable. I have to say, the way you write Hermione/Severus has really grown on me. I've even gotten to referring to him by his first name, instead of the way I grew up. I look forward to your next story!
Well, the way you described Severus' attire, or lack thereof, I figured it had to be someplace remote.
It was a great location, and I kind of thought the two of them were going to like, hangout there, and realax, but I guess there's no place like home.
Great story, again, and thanks for your great tales, You are the best!!
Your a very busy writer and a good one.
Much enjoyed. I usually do enjoy your stories...much. Seems like it should be longer than one chap though. Maybe just wishful thinking.
Absolutely touching. You did an excellent job of envoking their emotions of need and longing upon us readers, and even though I was doubtful what someone could do in 700+ words at first, you fulfilled those emotions quite nicely. Another great story to enjoy by Subversa.