Maria, I adore you and this fic. It is one of the most heartwarmingly sad tales I have ever had the pleasure of reading. You have a lovely way with words!
Keep up the great work and if you ever need a beta, feel free to contact me! I'd be happy to serve you anytime.
Author's Response: Haylee, my dear thank you so much for reviewing. You've been a great beta and I would never have gotten through this without you. *hug*
Aaw, this brought tears to my eyes!
I loved it.
Beautiful, just beautiful.
Hello Maria (:
I think this fic helps explain in a sort of AU kind of way how Andromeda turned out to be completely different from Bellatrix and Narcissa. It was very sweet and believable, especially the last line. Loved it. (:
Author's Response: Mavis! *tackles*rnIt's so sweet of you to drop by. It is a bit AU, isn't it? I'm glad you liked it.Thanksh, girly!
Nice job! You were able to show how Andromeda was so different from her sisters, because of her exposure to her Father.
Author's Response: Yerp, you got it. Thank you!
omg i luved it so much gud job
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you!
That was absolutely lovely. You did a great job. It felt very real, very believable. Excellent!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks!! ^.^
While I find it difficult to imagine Andromeda's father as you have him written (it just disagrees with my vision of him too much), you make him plausible (as I said it's just my preconceptions that make it difficult for me to believe him) , and there is no canon to suggest that this did not happen. You give a plausible reason for Andromeda to rebel, and you captured a six year old well.
Author's Response: I can understand. He's the 'Black' in the story and the assumed pure-blood crazy guy. But the Blacks to seem to have their share of rebels, so why not make him one as well, I thought. I think my version of him might care about the 'pure blood' thing, but not to the extent of creating a mania out of it. He loves his family, above anything. Thank you for you thoughts and review!
That was so sweet! It was believable and was...Amazing.
Author's Response: I'm relieved you thought it was believable; I tried hard with this one. So thanksh!! ^.^