Reviews For Surviving
Reviewer: beaternumber1
Date: 09/20/08 14:02
Chapter: Chapter 1

Yes Bailey,
Of course i loved holding that flag. I'm not being sarcastic at ALL.
Love little Missy

Author's Response: Ya well.... *sticks tounge out at computer very childishly* Walking around the house singing about werewolf attacks is FUN! So there once again little sis!

Reviewer: beaternumber1
Date: 09/20/08 13:40
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hi Bailey!
This is your little sis here. Yes i know i'm logged into your account, so this going to look odd to some people. I was the first person to hear this poem/ song! WOOOOT! I know i could have told you how annoying you are singing this, in person, but i thought it was more likly that you'de stop if i posted it on the internet. Just so you know i liked it THE FIRST time you sang it to me. Not the 100th.
Love your darling little sister.

Author's Response: Well THANKS darling little sister. Now you've embaressed me in front of my MANY fans. Hey wait a minute. The only place I stay logged in is on my computer in MY room!? What were you doing in my room little Missy? By the way you so did like it when i sang it the 100th time! You even held the little 100th anniversary flag! Love YOUR darling big sister. So there!

Reviewer: Moony14
Date: 08/16/08 22:43
Chapter: Chapter 1

Thats . . . thats a lot! I really do like it!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. It is pretty long isn't it... :)

Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4
Date: 06/19/08 15:27
Chapter: Chapter 1

I look at the ceiling,
as I lie in my bed.
A monsters thoughts,
are filling my head.
I know i'm that monster,
its true I can't lie.
I thought I would die,
I thought I would die.
^^Stupid Remus!!!! he is soooooo not a monster!!!!!

This was a great poem!!! I loved how Remus is the most emotional of the Marauders! You should definitely write more (I believe your name is) Bailey(correct me if I'm wrong)!!!!!!!!!!!! Great job!!!!

Author's Response: Thank You, i'm glad you liked it! Remus is my favorite character and i always wonderedt how he really thought about himself so i wrote something about it. You're right my name is Bailey. Thank you for reviewing

Reviewer: DontCallMeNymphadora
Date: 06/19/08 15:22
Chapter: Chapter 1

That is sooo good! This desplays how he would feel greatly! 10/10

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! It's the first poem i've ever writen so i didn't know if it would be any good.

Reviewer: quibblequill
Date: 06/19/08 15:21
Chapter: Chapter 1

First to review! I thought it was good. Though I wouldn't have named it Death, because when you think about it, it isn't about Death, it's about Remus and his recovering will to live.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. You're right about the title not really going with the poem. I spent days trying to think of something to call it. I was going to call it "Me" or "Someone", but my friends all said that those didn't really fit the poem either. What would have you sugested?

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