Enthralling. Update soon!
this is amazing - update soon!
Hey, this is an awesome stoy! I love James and Sirius... and your characterization of them is great! And this story is very believable (which I can't say for many fanfics) - I really really hope you update soon :)
Awesome chapter - I think you've really nailed all the characters - particuraly Lily. Keep them coming!
Ahhh, brilliant! I love your characterization of Sirius and James so far. I could really picture what Sirius was going through... *sob* But he'll come through. Sirius always does. Well, not always... *sob again...*
Anyway, I can't wait for more! Please update soon!
Wow! This is really good, update soon please!
Great fic so far! Keep it up!
I really loved that!
Yay!! I'm so happy for you--first chapter up! One of my top five best fanfics EVER. You are amazing! Listen up, people--watch out for this author, because just when you think she's produced a perfect chapter, she writes the next one and it's even better.
Can't believe nobody's left a review for this wonderful story yet! I'm glad to be the first so that I can tell you how much I loved reading this first chapter. You definitely seem to have a great handle on dialog. "‘You mean, you ran away?’ Sirius gave a short, bark-like laugh, ‘Well, I prefer to think of it in rather more manly terms, but that about sums it up.’" Loved that. Despite this very somber beginning you were able to include some really funny details that lightened the mood and also made it more realistic. Can't wait to read more!