Reviews For Growing Pains
Reviewer: Lily_Jean_Weasley95
Date: 02/18/12 2:46
Chapter: Redemption

This was so great! I really felt bad for Sirius (even though it was completely his fault), and it was great to see an angry side of Remus, since he always controls his anger. I love seeing the boys fight and make up, and James worry about Lily. Such an awesome story! :)

Reviewer: Lily_Jean_Weasley95
Date: 02/05/12 20:22
Chapter: Redemption

This was so great! I really felt bad for Sirius (even though it was completely his fault), and it was great to see an angry side of Remus, since he always controls his anger. I love seeing the boys fight and make up, and James worry about Lily. Such an awesome story! :)

Reviewer: delirioustk
Date: 03/01/09 13:53
Chapter: Redemption

i think i've re-read this a few times now. :)
my favourite marauder era fic. I was so disappointed to see that it ended here! T_T

Reviewer: mauradersometimes
Date: 11/24/08 17:16
Chapter: Redemption

Hey, this was a great ending and I really enjoyed the whole story :D
Do you have any plans to write a sequel or any more marauder-era fics? I thought you wrote Lily and Severus' characters really well and although we saw the beginnings of the end of their friendship in this you didnt really develop that story line...
But yeah this was great and I'd love to read anything else you write! x

Author's Response: I actually am working on a sequel, but it might be a while before I post because of craziness at school:)

Reviewer: Arcia
Date: 11/24/08 16:12
Chapter: Redemption

This is SUCH a good story, I absolutly love it! I have to say, you are hte best Harry Potter-writer I have yet encountered, your story is truly amazing. :)

Reviewer: Calico
Date: 11/24/08 15:24
Chapter: Kitchen Confidences

Wow this story rocked! It was expertly written and all the characters were nearly exactly how I imagined them. Amazing job! I hope you start another story soon.

Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 11/24/08 8:23
Chapter: Redemption

This has been such a wonderful story and what an amazing ending. Of course I knew James would forgive him but you kept the suspense going and when he finally did it brought a tear to my eye. I LOVED the fact that you brought Lily in as the one having a go at James. And Sirius is such a tortured, insecure individual.

Very sad this is the last chapter though *pouts*. It's been such a good read.

Well done!

Reviewer: izzygirl
Date: 11/22/08 15:40
Chapter: Conversations

Intriguing and exciting. Starscribe has done it again!

Reviewer: jaymarthow
Date: 11/16/08 17:18
Chapter: Cold Comfort

yay new chapter! And yeah, I think it makes sense Dumbledore wanting to talk to Sirius after what happened, cannon really, because if someone does something so...violent, the person ought to have some issues.
Great chappy. Your characters are so realistic, and Sirius is just raw emotion in a way you can almost feel it. Gosh I'll stop rambling, keep it up!

Reviewer: mauradersometimes
Date: 11/14/08 8:43
Chapter: Cold Comfort

I cried my way throught this chapter! I really like how dumbledore came out to see Sirius...
This story is so amazing, you make all the characters seem so real and you make it so easy to empathize with all their feelings and motives...
I love it! :D xxx

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 11/03/08 17:30
Chapter: Divided

well written i love the way you got remus all shirty with sirus, great story

Reviewer: dee-hearts-sirius
Date: 11/03/08 8:18
Chapter: Divided

This chapter is heartbreaking. Great job!!!! I can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: Burning Star
Date: 11/02/08 23:29
Chapter: Divided

and it keeps getting better! :) they are all so perfectly characterized and understandable; remus's anger, sirius's guilt and caring, james's support for remus, peter being peter. and the last line... don't mention it. really. don't. lol ok i'm not making any sense, so i'll stop now. good job!

Reviewer: jaymarthow
Date: 11/02/08 10:24
Chapter: Divided

i loved it! gosh remus was harsh, but whatever, sirius was a jerk. when is the next chapter coming out? (x

Author's Response: asap:) glad you liked it!

Reviewer: jaymarthow
Date: 11/01/08 9:37
Chapter: Conversations

Ok, I pretty much registered just so I could review this story. It's SO good! You got to keep writing it pleaaase. I love the characterization, and the situations soud so real it's genius.

Reviewer: smilelikelilydid_x_x
Date: 10/09/08 23:30
Chapter: Conversations for doing that YOU KNOW FULL WELL HE COULD'VE DIED!

Nothing against you, starscribe, just sirius...It's really well written...

Author's Response: no offence taken of course:) I feel like Sirius's complete thoughtlessness and stupidity, juxtaposed with his obvious affection for his closest friends, is one of the things that make this event so interesting (and therefore so fun to write about).

Reviewer: Burning Star
Date: 10/03/08 22:22
Chapter: Conversations

I have to say, I found this absolutely brilliant. I've always wondered (haven't we all) what possessed Sirius to tell Snape, and I think your version fits perfectly. Then, the way Sirius reacts to what has happened is amazing as well; his concern for Regulus, his bitterness, his absolute assurance in Snape's cowardice. Whether he's deluding himself or not, the writing shows it all.The beginning of the end.
I also loved James's reaction.
Um, right. reviews aren't just to rave, are they? suggestions... well, I love what you've done with this fic. Your characterization is amazing. Sorry this is so useless... I really don't have anything to fix. Maybe, on your quotes, don't use the same word twice in a row, as in asked or said? I think I saw that a couple of times... but I know it's hard. Anyways, with something that small, shows what I know. Good luck, and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like it, and I appreciate the advice:)

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 10/02/08 13:56
Chapter: Conversations

snape desearves getting attacked my remus i don't care what anyone says after that.

Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 10/01/08 9:44
Chapter: Conversations

I love the way you've done this part of the story. I totally believe in this way of Sirius telling Snape how to get to Remus. Well done!

Reviewer: Danjurofit
Date: 09/18/08 13:10
Chapter: Kitchen Confidences

I love this story. The characters seem very true to my impressions of them. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read more!

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