Reviewer: Hermione64224
Date: 10/08/11 15:38
Chapter: Chapter 1: Till the Day I Die

wow 1st 1 was really good. im crying now

Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4
Date: 08/23/08 17:58
Chapter: Chapter 2: He's Gone

Hey, Heather! Hmm... that's odd. I never read this chapter, even though it's on my favorites... I was really busy, so here I am now!

Hmmm... this may sound crazy, but this would be perfect as a song for the radio. Just like, change Quidditch to football or something and make Harry and Cedric different names and I can hear it on the radio! That's never happened for me with a poem before! After all, lyrics are only poetry, but this is the only poem here that could remind me of a song! Great job! {BeccaA}

Reviewer: dani123
Date: 07/25/08 20:38
Chapter: Chapter 2: He's Gone

That was just as good as the first one! Good job! :)

Reviewer: dani123
Date: 07/07/08 12:00
Chapter: Chapter 1: Till the Day I Die

This is really your first fic? My God, you have amazing talent! I really love this poem and it's one of my favorites! Keep up the good work! :D

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch!!I wasn't so sure it was that good, but it turns out that it was!Wow!

Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4
Date: 07/05/08 20:21
Chapter: Chapter 1: Till the Day I Die

Heather! Hi! This was amazing! So much emotion, and from Snape! Snape is cool and everything (and a very complex character, though undeniably one of my favorites, but I never expected him to feel so strongly to someone like he did with Lily. Great great great job! My favorite part was:

I laid Lilies on your grave,
As I fought back tears.
I just want you to know,
I will always love you dear.
^^This line had a ton of emotion in it, I love how you portray Snape as someone who tried to remain strong after heartbreak, it was just brilliant. Excellent job! {BeccA} P.S. This is going on my favorites!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!I was considering deleteing this because I thought it was too mushy but I changed my mind because of your review. I tried to put a lot of emotion in that part and I'm glad it worked out!Thanks for putting this in your faves!Next chapter is in the works!

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 06/12/08 16:23
Chapter: Chapter 1: Till the Day I Die

*sniff* good poem!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing and the compliment!

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