Reviewer: Hermione64224
Date: 10/08/11 15:38
Chapter: Chapter 1: Till the Day I Die

wow 1st 1 was really good. im crying now

Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4
Date: 08/23/08 17:58
Chapter: Chapter 2: He's Gone

Hey, Heather! Hmm... that's odd. I never read this chapter, even though it's on my favorites... I was really busy, so here I am now!

Hmmm... this may sound crazy, but this would be perfect as a song for the radio. Just like, change Quidditch to football or something and make Harry and Cedric different names and I can hear it on the radio! That's never happened for me with a poem before! After all, lyrics are only poetry, but this is the only poem here that could remind me of a song! Great job! {BeccaA}

Reviewer: dani123
Date: 07/25/08 20:38
Chapter: Chapter 2: He's Gone

That was just as good as the first one! Good job! :)

Reviewer: dani123
Date: 07/07/08 12:00
Chapter: Chapter 1: Till the Day I Die

This is really your first fic? My God, you have amazing talent! I really love this poem and it's one of my favorites! Keep up the good work! :D

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch!!I wasn't so sure it was that good, but it turns out that it was!Wow!

Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4
Date: 07/05/08 20:21
Chapter: Chapter 1: Till the Day I Die

Heather! Hi! This was amazing! So much emotion, and from Snape! Snape is cool and everything (and a very complex character, though undeniably one of my favorites, but I never expected him to feel so strongly to someone like he did with Lily. Great great great job! My favorite part was:

I laid Lilies on your grave,
As I fought back tears.
I just want you to know,
I will always love you dear.
^^This line had a ton of emotion in it, I love how you portray Snape as someone who tried to remain strong after heartbreak, it was just brilliant. Excellent job! {BeccA} P.S. This is going on my favorites!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!I was considering deleteing this because I thought it was too mushy but I changed my mind because of your review. I tried to put a lot of emotion in that part and I'm glad it worked out!Thanks for putting this in your faves!Next chapter is in the works!

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 06/12/08 16:23
Chapter: Chapter 1: Till the Day I Die

*sniff* good poem!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing and the compliment!

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
At the Battlefront by Nagini Riddle 3rd-5th Years
The Final Battle at Hogwarts rages on as the victims question whether or not...
Crocus by Equinox Chick 3rd-5th Years
Four years after the Battle of Hogwarts, Andromeda Tonks exists only for her...
Other Lives and Dimensions and Finally a Love Story by MoRoCcAnAnDpRoUd 6th-7th Years
The year is 1977, and the Wizarding World is in turmoil, but it doesn't really...
FEATURED
My Troubled Tyrant by Belledeg Professors
Keedie Dante has experienced many amazing things during her time at Hogwarts...
His and Hers by Acacia Carter 3rd-5th Years
In a perfect world, Neville and Hannah's wedding would go off without a hitch...
All This Waiting For The Sky To Fall by Dawnie 1st-2nd Years
They found her body - broken, bleeding, face filled with signs of pain and fear...
Sanguini, the Vampire by teh tarik 6th-7th Years
Vampirism is the persistence and the perpetuity of the body, a madness of the...
Lost and Found by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor 3rd-5th Years
When Tracey Davis's financial security was a casualty of war, her family is...
CATEGORIES