Reviews For My Heart
Reviewer: Rikku
Date: 06/04/08 18:13
Chapter: My Heart

and then I deleted the review I had written as a response, which was after I responded to your review, so I couldn't edit that either :S
just wanted to say thank you for the review, and that I got a lot of help from my beta-reader about the heart being made of gold.. I'm glad you liked the poem!

Reviewer: Calico
Date: 06/04/08 16:22
Chapter: My Heart

I like the way you brought magic into a poem that could otherwise have come from anyone's perspective. The idea of a heart transfigured from gold to rock brings a perfect picture to mind. Great job!

Author's Response: whoops.. I accidentally responded with a new review..! Anyway, still glad you liked it..

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