Reviews For Nobody's Watching
Reviewer: Trivia Camlee
Date: 06/09/08 19:46
Chapter: Nobody's Watching

Great job! It was well written, and I think the characterizations were great. I especially love that 'Andy' asks if Bellatrix wants to dance with her; that was so sweet.

This fic made me almost feel sorry for Bellatrix- she doesn't seem so bad in this, but rather like a child who just has to put on a brave face and face the world, no matter the consequences. Once again, good job :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Elf01
Date: 06/09/08 3:26
Chapter: Nobody's Watching

How did Bella find out about Ted? I like your characterization. I see Bellatrix warning Andromeda about Ted, because she is afraid that Andromeda will get hurt, by the family or by Voldemort if Andromeda continues seeing Ted. I can imagine a young Andromeda dancing the way you described.

Author's Response: I thought that by Bella being a Death Eater, she would learn more about half-blood and muggleborn wizards because of Voldemort's determination to kill them. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: cassie123
Date: 06/09/08 0:30
Chapter: Nobody's Watching

This is great. I love your characterisation of Andromeda and Bella.
Really good!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Calico
Date: 06/08/08 19:00
Chapter: Nobody's Watching

This was inspired! I love the way dancing stands for freedom and innocence, and how you allowed Andromeda to see Bellatrix behind her haughty demeanor, the way she would appear to someone who has known her forever. I can really relate to what Bella says she can't dance because it's childish - older siblings do that all the time, just to prove they're more mature. This was a great idea!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!

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