Reviewer: dani123
Date: 07/07/08 12:05
Chapter: Part One: 1979 - 1981

This was amazing! You have totally inspired me to read more poetry because of this poem. I can't wait to read the next one you write! Keep up the good work! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm currently tinkering at a 1,500 words long poem - and it's difficult without end. But I hope to have it up soon. Thanks for making my day with reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: social loner
Date: 07/07/08 1:14
Chapter: Part One: 1979 - 1981

You did a fantastic job! I would never be able to do anything close to something like this, so I have supreme respect for you.

You have a great, natural rhythm, which really helped me stay in the moment and follow along. Alos, I loved how the rhyming wasn't as forced. It made the piece flow beautifully.

"The fiercest war soon is raging,
innocent people all over engaging,
hunting down creature and man:
to survive you have to do what you can."

This is only one of my favorite quotes, but I just had to point it out! You have a great way with words, and I love your personal style.

Overall, great job and I look forward to part two!


Author's Response: Thank you so much, Olivia. Your review just made my day. And I'm working on part two which is suddenly a little stuck halfway through thanks to the plot bunny having run away. I hope it'll find home soon.

Reviewer: Rikku
Date: 06/06/08 14:12
Chapter: Part One: 1979 - 1981

I liked this poem very much.. The rythm was good, making it an easy read, and it was still very meaningful.. Looking forward to part 2!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Part two is halfway written but I'm having a writer's block at the moment. Hopefully it won't take too long until it's finished.

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