"They sealed their fate to die to save the ones they both love." That's so true! This is an amazing poem, I love your style. You really have some talent. Keep up the good work! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Awesome poem! Just one nitpicky thing - in the last line of the first stanza, did you mean to say 'perilous' where you wrote 'parlous'?
Author's Response: Well, apparently "parlous" is an older word that means the same as "perilous." I was trying to get a two syllable word so the line wouldn't stick out. >.< So parlous it will remain, unless you have any suggestions? :D
That was really good. Your descriptions, especially.
Author's Response: Thanks! :D