Just like the first time I read this, I have tears streaming down my face. I know that you can capture this type of thing, by imagining you are in the same situation. I know how I would feel, and we would know better then many because of knowing the twin connection. I like your OC Aria, and I hope you take the time to write her story sometime. It would be great to read what I know you have in your head! LOL Thanks for the great read! Cyns
Author's Response: Thanks again Sis! I Love Aria and I have so many details of her in my head, just need to find the time to sit down and just write it! Maybe at the beach I'll have time to get it started...although maybe I'll choose to just relax and read other people's stories instead. Guess we'll see!
This was a great story, Cwiddy. I really liked the emotion that you put in it and the descriptions were outstanding. This was truly a great take on the loss of Fred. Amazing job, Haylee
Author's Response: Glad that you enjoyed my story! This was one of my favorite stories that I've written...and as a twin...I just put myself in the shoes of George. It was hard to write, but I was happy with the results! :) Chris
I enjoyed this fic. I thought that Aria was Luna at first, due to her looks and attidude. However this makes sense when you explain that Luna helped Aria through her grief.
I think that you have captured Georges grief well.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm working on Aria...she is an OC that is seen in several of my fictions...someday I'll have time to write her entire story (and that of her twin sister's). Thanks for reading, and the review!
I cried, wonderfully gut-wrenching. Well done.
Author's Response: Thanks :) I worked hard on this story...guess I just put myself in George's place. Maybe that is why I'm creating Aria and Aurora. I'm a twin, so maybe I can just understand.