wow thts a great story i loved it i lyk da line a litttle birde told me hehe
It' great but no offense i don't understand the title of the story. my eyesight may be going but the title is familiar if i say it out loud......hmmm i am no confused. oh well. Anyway nice chapter, you portrayed Harry great buti am just wondering how Malfoy is gona com in or.....nope i definatley hop he is not one of those death eaters....shivers...Anyway going on again i know so, great chapter. Update soon. Added to fav's. 10/10
Wow- this is really good!! I'm really amazed and can't wait for more!! This is definitely going on my favorites!! Chloe "Longing for Light"
Pretty good chapter! My only criticism (I did not spell that right, did I?) is that I think Ginny would have told somebody. Other than that, it's great! 10/10
Just out of curiousity...does your title mean, the darkness of the dawn remains...??
Not a bad first chapter...if I do say so myself. That's really interesting, seeing Ginny as some sort of visionary. And with Hermione being in danger that must be deep. I wonder what Lupin will do...listening to Harry. Will he follow up with bring Hermione and her parents to Grimmauld place? Great first chapter, I wonder what's in store. Peace Out!!
Author's Response: close, the title means the darkness has passed, or something like that haha. im glad you like my story and thanks a ton for the review!