Reviews For The Dream Game
Reviewer: Nyphadora_Tonks-Lupin
Date: 12/18/08 19:09
Chapter: Chapter 1

ok now we need an after fic wher they go to Remus or Tonkses house and make those dreams reality (I rilly need to read that now that you have pushed my hed so far down the gutter an alagter has eten it) LOL XD

Reviewer: YouMaySayNymphadora
Date: 06/09/08 3:33
Chapter: Chapter 1

Make that a pitcher full! Wow, that was hot! Good idea to call it a draw there, or they would have needed cold showers!

Well written, saying just enough, and noting more. Very well done! And I've always liked the idea of Tonks & Remus being "Legilimens" and "Occlumens". Nice touch.

Author's Response: Thanks! I thought it was time to let them have a little fun. Their story tends to be a bit grim :)

Reviewer: shewolf2000
Date: 06/05/08 12:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

I loved it! But in my personal opinion, it was too short. I need more! Forget the damn ice water and make the dream a reality already! But it was a cute story. Another great job!

Author's Response: LOL! I write everything as a one-shot, but you can be sure there will be more stories and they will get there eventually.

Reviewer: Rhi for HP
Date: 06/04/08 21:40
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh, this is so cute! The ending is just perfect as well. What really cinches it for me is the originality of the plot. I love the idea of them seeing their shared dream in each others' minds in a very wizardish way. Great!

Author's Response: Thanks! I was in the mood to write something light, and thought it would be fun to come up with a wizard's variation on the old playing-footsie-under-the-table-at-a-crowded-restaurant thing.

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