Reviewer: HermionesTwin_FromOz
Date: 06/14/08 22:54
Chapter: Prologue: The Chamber

*is shocked* Arya! I didn't know you had another fic up! *loves* It's so good! I love this plot -- so very original. I agree: Ced needs a bit more love! *hugs* I LOVED this, and can't wait fro your next update... on both of your wonderful fics! =D

Love,
Caitlin xxoxx

Author's Response: Lol...that's me, modest old Arya! ;) Thanks!! I know that the other fic is taking some time, but I think something is up with my beta...she's not sent it back... :(....I'll update this one ASAP! I'm writing the second chapter, and I hope it will be up soon! =D *huggles*

Reviewer: haydensnape
Date: 06/13/08 18:13
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Goblet of Fire

Nice. Good to see what happened in Cedrics POV.Except in GOF, Cedric asked harry how he entered the Tournament, and harry could tell he didn't believ him. But thats okay. Not everything has to be canon compliment!

Author's Response: *cringes* I sooo need to re-read GoF. It makes me feel really nice to see that you like thos story enough to review every chapter! Thanks! *squishee*

Reviewer: haydensnape
Date: 06/13/08 18:06
Chapter: Prologue: The Chamber

Good plot idea!But when Cedric died, he was 17. So he's only 1 year older than Colin. If I were you, I wouldn't put so much emphasis on how he's a teenager and it's gonna be so hard to explain to him. But otherwise, good job!

Author's Response: Thanks! You've got a point there...I'll work on it! Thanks a lot for your review...goodness knows Cedric is underloved. *huggles*

Reviewer: phoenixgurl321
Date: 06/10/08 7:17
Chapter: Prologue: The Chamber

Oh my goodness. This is the beginning of a really good story. I can't wait for the next part. But, I like it how you put in that Colin Creevey died. It's still kind of sad though.

Author's Response: Yay! First review! Thanks a lot...I'll be putting the other chapters up soon, don't worry! :) Umm...Colin DID die, remember? In the Battle of Hogwarts, he died...I know...I cried a lot when he died...:(( Anyways, thank yo for your review! *huggles*

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