I do believe you should write more on this piece, only because I would love to see the reactions of the other characters to Ginny and Draco. I loved the whole piece, really well written. A lot of showing and not telling which i quite enjoy. Well done :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I would love to write more but I am currently working on a Harry/Ginny story which is what I really love. But you never know...I may just write one:)
Now i'm slightly upset. you don't have more stories for me to read. I was realyl looing forward to readign more of your work. I mght go though you favorites you seem to share my ideas bout storeis so maybe you've read soem good ones that I'll like. Again I loved your story
Author's Response: thank you so much! I was going to upload some new ideas I had coming but my whole hard drive got wiped out so I now have to rewrite it all again. But dont worry, i'll post something soon.
This story is going down as one of my favorites. Ls chapter was so sad to read that I didn't even review it but it was a good hpater non the less i just had to get to this one becasue i refused to belive that it could end up badly. I loved to see draco finally be honest. I lvoed this chapter. I'm usung the word lvoe a lot but really this sotry deserves it. You write very nicely. I lik yoru style hopefulyl you will have written other stories i can check out. this one gets my full approval
amazing chapter, it made me smile. absolutly amazign really.
The spoiler aletr mae my night. I really like the turn things have taken. i feel like Ginny was powerful to leave him behind. I wonder wahtit was she read that mae her take that choice. And i wonder if Draco really would have left otherwise, I think he might have... then agian he is back now. And clearly he had soemthign to say back then and something to say now. This Gabriel guy is intersting. I wonder what will happen next, certainly soemthing good.
I really like this story it's excactly the type of story I needed today. You write an interesting pace, where it is not to fast but it isn't too slow either. The small details that you include make it seem like you aren't just sumarizing their voyage. I like your characterization. All the characters seem to be within their parameters even if you do have a unique take on them. It's a hard thing to do and you have done it well. It saddens me to think of what Ginny will do because I have a feeling it will be sad. I hope I am wrong. Really a nice job,this is a hard pairing to write belivably and you have done just that. I quite like this story. I'm glad I don't have to wait for updates ;)
I've got to say I love the story...I just wish I could of heard Malfoy actually tell Potter.
u know i still cant imagine ginny and draco getting togather i just cant acsept it
hellaaa good! hahaha malfoy is so amazing.. you captured his part perfectly! but ya, great story! your an amazing author :)
Very cute! I loved it! =)
awsum!!!!!!!thaz all i hav 2 say...u no i jus realizd itz jus like my luv fiv xcept tha marrying nd sex....nwayz...um tuchd....
again wow!!!! i think u r my favorit authr so far....if i like tha last part i wil make u my fab authr...
Author's Response: thank you so much! I really appreciate it
wow!!!i like tha way u end each chaptr!!!
nixce work......kip it up!!!
nixce work......kip it up!!!
the pace is relli gud... keeps you interested.. gud job..
hey i know you finished this story awhile ago but i felt bad that there were so few reviews because it really is a very good story. just the fact that you finished it is a huge deal--most authors never finish their stories, unless its like a oneshot. but i really thought it was excellent. happy writing! :D
Wow! That was great, the whole story was. I didn't want it to end and I also believe that if you wanted to you have enough background and information to be able to continue the story. Yet again it was great and i can't wait to read you other fics.