Ahh!! I love it! Elisabeth Lorelai Marcello, what a cute name! Brilliant chapter, and I'm so glad Persephone is moving on! Rickert's a tool. :P
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I love this!!!!!!!!! best chapter by far!!!!!!!!!!! it was so increadible.. and i really love the name that Pers choose for her daughter.... plzzz update soon... i really cant wait to read more abt the baby and wat happens after this...
Author's Response: Thanks! I really liked writing this one =D
Haha, all this recent talk about her family in this chapter, I'm getting the feeling her family is going to see the birth announcement and at least one of her sisters will come trying to find her. Wonder if Rickert will see it too and have any reaction...
Author's Response: hehe...you'll just have to wait and see! the next chapter will be along shortly =]
i love it!
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Oh dear. I know she's upset bit she's being very unwise.
Dun dun duuuuun! I think I'm with Jana. It can't end well because they are on completely different pages, and he gets nasty when he's annoyed as we saw originally. Just because he's nice to her now in the first flush of romance doesn't mean his nature has changed, and she isn't the sort of person who could handle it. I she had an awful temper they could blow up at one another, but that's not the case.
Ooh, and I just remembered that Odessa is the one who went to school with him! Eep!
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another brilliant chapter :D... cant wait for the next one.. update soon
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Awww!!! Good chapter! And thank you for still thinking of your fanfictions while college hunting all over Ohio, while doing all your other work! I can totally sympathize. :P
Author's Response: Haha, thanks so much! I'll be so glad when all this college stuff is over =P
where is rickert??? he needs to step up and do his job!! I was glad to see Sophy again!
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Wow... I kind of predicted that she would feel like this... but I wish she didn't. Stupid Rickert. I wouldn't take him back.... but please make him come back! And Persephone might devote herself to the new infant, instead, so she might be ok... will it be a girl or a boy?
Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see...=P thanks for reviewing!
When I read this, I want to start belting Les Miserables.
HE TOOK MY CHILDHOOD IN HIS STRIDE!
but he was gone when autumn came...
Although, Fantine sounds a little more independent than I perceive Persephone to be.
Congrats on the Quicksilver!
Author's Response: thanks so much! lol fantine is my favorite character in les mis =D
Congratulations for the Quick Silver award.
Will she and Claude get together or will Rickert come back? Inquiring minds want to know.
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moving on is always hard but at least she's trying... i cant wait to find out more about the baby! will she tell her family?
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! The next chapter should be along sometime next week =]
Yay!!! finally this chapter is up...hav been waiting for it for quite some time now.... I like the way u should that Persephone compares the guy to Rickert.... but to tell u the truth i feel that Rickert doesnt deserve someone like Persephone... *sighs*... i really feel bad for her.... but she should move on though sooner or later....by the way, this chapter is very well writen.... i cant wait to read the next chapter!!!!! plz update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'll try to update sometime next week--I have a 20-page research paper due in English on monday, and I'm visiting colleges halfway across the country at the same time, so I'm kind of swamped this week haha. thanks again!
poor girl! whats she going to do? i have a feeling we havent seen or heard the last from rickert yet...
Woah, that was a bit sudden. =x After Rickert's behavior, I hope Persephone gets over him quickly and moves on with her life. I'd almost say she could patch up things with her family, but since she's not married and has a baby on the way, I don't think her parents are going to be all that compassionate to her situation. I do hope that Rickert tries to come groveling back at some point and she's moved on, but I bet that won't happen. :(
I really hate Rickert.
What a jerk.
Good chapter, though!
i pity persephone.... i cant believe Ricket would do tat to her.., *sighs* .. I hope she keeps the child... update soon... i know its been a while for u to update this but try to make it soon... cant wait
Author's Response: I'm submitting the next chapter as we speak. Thanks for reviewing!
THAT LITTLE SCUMBAG!!! I HATE Rickert!!
Poor, poor Persephone... how will she get through without the money? Maybe he'll come back. Oh, I hope he does! Great chapter-- I actually screamed "Yes!" when I saw that you updated! Keep it up!
Author's Response: hahaha thank you so much!
Wow, what a twist. I definitely didn't see that coming! Please update soon. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: thanks! the next chapter is coming soon =]