good story
Author's Response: Thanks. It's an ongoing project that I'm currently still working on, but I'm glad you like it.
I would like to read the unedited version.
Author's Response: You can view the unedited versions of chapters 11 & 22 on either fanfic.net or Ashwinder - same pen name, story name & chapter #. I hope you enjoy them!
I'll admit that, at first, I was a little put off by the idea of a Hermione/Snape fan fiction, but I'm actually really glad I read this. It was quite well-written, and you're a very talented writer. :] Can't wait to move on to the next one.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Hermione/Snape is such a great pairing. I'm glad I was able to convince you.
hah i want to read the unedited version lmao. this story is amazingggg i'm completley addicted!
Author's Response: You can view the unedited versions of chapters 11 & 22 on either fanfic.net or Ashwinder - same pen name, story name & chapter #. I hope you enjoy them!
I'd be interested in reading the unedited version.
Great job. :] I've enjoyed the story so far.
Author's Response: You can view the unedited versions of chapters 11 & 22 on either fanfic.net or Ashwinder - same pen name, story name & chapter #. I hope you enjoy them!
^____^ Lovely story!
Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.
Can't wait!
Author's Response: You can view the unedited versions of chapters 11 & 22 on either fanfic.net or Ashwinder - same pen name, story name & chapter #. I hope you enjoy them!
Great description! I'm interested in the unedited version.
Author's Response: You can view the unedited versions of chapters 11 & 22 on either fanfic.net or Ashwinder - same pen name, story name & chapter #. I hope you enjoy them!
very interested in unedited review!
Author's Response: You can view the unedited versions of chapters 11 & 22 on either fanfic.net or Ashwinder - same pen name, story name & chapter #. I hope you enjoy them!
I truly enjoyed it! Do not underestimate your skill or creativity. I am an avid reader, so much so it is embarrassing to admit, and I enjoyed your work greatly. I cannot say the same of much of what I read.
Author's Response: You can view the unedited versions of chapters 11 & 22 on either fanfic.net or Ashwinder - same pen name, story name & chapter #. I hope you enjoy them! Thank you very much for your kind review. I doubt myself so much and it feels good to have someone give my a pat on back every once in a while. :)
Ohoh, so good. Unedited please! rdonahue36@yahoo.com!
Please send me the undedited version! Its really....well....exciting =x......Im at rdonahue36@yahoo.com
I adore it! definatly the best story I have read on mugglenet it's amazing you really have a tallent! it's so touching when Lucius recovers and the way he is OOC fits in perfectly, I have always been fond of the Malfoys but the way you make them act makes them even better, something I thought was impossible! please please continue this story it's a real jem! :)
Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much for your glowing review. I'm especially glad that the Malfoys' OOCness didn't throw you off them. I love them so much, both nasty and nice, and with this story, I just wanted to explore a nicer side of them. Don't worry, this story continues to be my first fanfic priority and I am working hard on the new version. I hope you'll back to read it once it's all finished. Thanks again!
Thanx Old Friend. I did read that story and I thought that it was really. I'm dying that you aren't putting up that next story story. please put it up before I go insane.
Ana
please the un edited one cuz this is one is super fantastical!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LUV IT
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. The unedited version can be found on both fanfiction.net & Ashwinder. Same story name, same pen name, same chapter number. Hope you enjoy.
When are you going to put up the next story about Severus and Hermione? Hopefully it will be on really soon. Update with that next story so I can read and review your next great story.
Ana
Author's Response: Hello, old friend! I am still working on the updates to Vomica Domitor (its become a fricken novel!), but I did write a short story called April Fools - not sure if I told you about that. It's not on Mugglenet because it's WAY too smutty but you can find it on Ashwinder or fanfic.net under my pen name. Hopefully I will have this story finished and updated on this site soon! Please don't give up on me, lol.
want to read uncensored really good story great humanity in characters
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. The unedited version can be found on both fanfiction.net & Ashwinder. Same story name, same pen name, same chapter number. Hope you enjoy.
I adore this story, and I have been checking frequently to see when the next part will be up, do you know when it should be up?
(:
Author's Response: I'm working on it feverishly, it's just taking far longer than I ever intended it to. So, honestly? Another month or two at least. Thanks so much for checking in, though. I'm so glad to know that you enjoyed it and are anxiously anticipating the rest. Knowing that people actually give a darn keeps me writing even when I find it difficult. I promise, I will not abandon it.
I wanna see the unedited version!
Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease
Author's Response: lol. The unedited version can be found on both fanfiction.net & Ashwinder. Same story name, same pen name, same chapter number. Thanks
You are one amazing writer! I am hooked to this story. I stayed up all night reading it, and now I'll be reading the unedited version. I cannot wait for the sequal(: good job!