the story is so good! i really like it! i would love to read the unedited version too!
im loving the story! i would like to see the unedited version please!
Can't wait for the sequel, I also would love to read te unedited version.
I loved every bit of this story.. I could barely look away the whole time. You have amazing talent when it comes to writing, and I cant wait to see more from you!.
I love this chapter... And would LOVE to read the unedited version! You are an amazing writer.
I would love to read the un-edited version please :)
sooooo no more chapters?
ah.... I had to stop reading for a moment and just imagined myself sitting on the sofa with Snape who sounds just like Alan Rickman's in my head reading P&P to me... safe to say there was a very girly giggle...
omg!!! I really like chapter. I'd tell you how awesome it is, but I can't explain it. Then Severus shouted "Miss Granger" and hermione was like "The lemongrass should be minced" Thats some good writing. I saw your end notes and I was wondering if I could take a look at that unedited chapter? Thanks
I love this chapter. It's very well detailed. It's a good thing you remembered that they are wizards and witches so you used that in this chapter. May I have the unedited version? (to look at not to steal)
This chapter is amazing. I would really like to read the unedited version.
cant wait for more, your writing is amazing ! ! ! ! ! please send me the unedited version xx
OH.MYGOD!!!!THIS.IS.SO.DISTURBING!!!!!But I read it anyway...wierd huh?
8-O...That. Is. Very. DISTURBING!!!!!
That was a really good story! Your writing style is very unique and captivating and the characters were all believable. Also, I would like to read the unedited chapters, the complete story is always better than the edited version in my opinion.
this was an amazing chapter and i would like to read the unedited version
OMG u are really good writer i hope to see the un edited version soon! hope to see more u write soon.
WHY must it be over??? This was such a captivating story!!! You have enhanced my already unhealthly level of adoration for Severus!! Keep up the great work! Can't wait for the sequel :)
Oh my lord. This was an INTENSE chapter!!!!!! I loved it!!!! And I would really like to read the unedited version too please.