I love this chapter... And would LOVE to read the unedited version! You are an amazing writer.
I would love to read the un-edited version please :)
sooooo no more chapters?
ah.... I had to stop reading for a moment and just imagined myself sitting on the sofa with Snape who sounds just like Alan Rickman's in my head reading P&P to me... safe to say there was a very girly giggle...
omg!!! I really like chapter. I'd tell you how awesome it is, but I can't explain it. Then Severus shouted "Miss Granger" and hermione was like "The lemongrass should be minced" Thats some good writing. I saw your end notes and I was wondering if I could take a look at that unedited chapter? Thanks
I love this chapter. It's very well detailed. It's a good thing you remembered that they are wizards and witches so you used that in this chapter. May I have the unedited version? (to look at not to steal)
This chapter is amazing. I would really like to read the unedited version.
cant wait for more, your writing is amazing ! ! ! ! ! please send me the unedited version xx
OH.MYGOD!!!!THIS.IS.SO.DISTURBING!!!!!But I read it anyway...wierd huh?
8-O...That. Is. Very. DISTURBING!!!!!
That was a really good story! Your writing style is very unique and captivating and the characters were all believable. Also, I would like to read the unedited chapters, the complete story is always better than the edited version in my opinion.
this was an amazing chapter and i would like to read the unedited version
OMG u are really good writer i hope to see the un edited version soon! hope to see more u write soon.
WHY must it be over??? This was such a captivating story!!! You have enhanced my already unhealthly level of adoration for Severus!! Keep up the great work! Can't wait for the sequel :)
Oh my lord. This was an INTENSE chapter!!!!!! I loved it!!!! And I would really like to read the unedited version too please.
I just want to say...I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!! God! A lusty Snape?? YUM!!!!
Again, amazing writing skills. You depict things very well!!
I want to see the unedited version!!!
I'm really enjoying this story! You have amazing writing skills. Severus is a bit too...happy? No, not the right word, but its a change from previous stories I've read.
You're a great writer like siriusly, haha pun intended, so yea me and my friends would like to see the unedited version but I'm not sure how your going to get it to us