I really do love your writting style. I like how you had Lucis team up with Draco and Severus with Hermione for chess. That was a really smart idea!!
KEEP UPDATING as much as possible. You really inspire me to write ramdom stories but I doon't have a lot of guts to put it on the site.
Ana
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the compliment! rnThat is awesome that you have been inspired to write your own stories, thats how I started too. If you need a little confidence, I suggest getting a good beta to go over your work. They will be able to tell you if its good or not and help to refine it. rnThanks again for support of my story. Stay tuned!
i wonder what it is that dumbledore wants severus to tell hermione... *ponders for a bit*... oh well i guess we'll find out soon enough...
Author's Response: Yes, Severus' secrets will come out soon. Stay tuned!
was great update ur nxt chapter asap plzzzzzzzzzzzz
Author's Response: Thanks! Stay tuned!
Ch.7 was amazingly good and so was 6 was good also but about Lucis getting better all of a sudden that is a little far fetch but all in all it still a damn good story!!! Cha.7 was also good interesting that Draco has picked it up that Hermione likes Severus and that Severus likes Hermione and he is afraid to say anything. Keep updating as soon as possible. Keep writting!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. rnI agree that the potion and Lucius' recovery is a bit too miraculous but sometimes you just have to have believe in magic ;)rnStay tuned!
Great chapter! I think, given their current situations, the Malfoys aren't totally out of character. I really enjoy reading the conversations between Draco and Hermione...I know we haven't seen anything from Snape's point of view (yet?) but I hope to see the other pair's talk!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'd like to think that I punished them just enough to force them to be better guys, lol. I love them good and I love them evil... They just needed to be good for this particular story. rnDon't worry, you'll get to see what Severus is up to before too long. rnStay tuned!
wow... i wonder what severus feels for hermione??? update soon please...
Author's Response: Severus is like a box of chocolates.... lol. rnStay tuned, more to come!
This is a really good story, I hope you update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Stay tuned!
OMG!! This whole beginning has been great! You had me in tears with your description of Lucius. It was great the way Hermione and Draco came to a truce too. I also think Lucius is one of the best looking characters in the books.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. rnI drool over Lucius so much... lol
I'm glad that the potion worked for Lucius. I only wish that we could haqve something like that in real life! ;0)
Wonderful chapter, and I loved the fact that Lucius sought out Hermione's forgiveness for the wrongs that he had against her. It was very touching, and she was beyond thanks, crying over him and his sad appearance.
And Draco was grateful towards her as well. All in all a very sweet and poigent chapter.
I look forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for much for your review. I'm glad that you enjoyed Lucius metamorphisis. Stay tuned, more to come!
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYY
i hope that potion is permanent!!!!!
but yaay!
awesome chapter:D
Author's Response: I love Lucius too much to take away his second lease on life. :)rnStay tuned, more to come!
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYY
i hope that potion is permanent!!!!!
but yaay!
awesome chapter:D
Author's Response: :)
I like these versions of Draco and Lucius better than the evil sadistic ones. They're going to keep making appearances throughout the story, right?
Author's Response: Thanks! rnYes, this is definately a Slytherin based story. Lots of my favorite men. ;)
My only critism of the chapter is that the potion had an effect that was almost too miraculous. I think it would have been more realistic if he hadn't been completely transformed by the potion. But... what do I know. Right?
Other than that I love this story. I agree that Draco's entrance was abrubt, and I'm glad that you've fixed it.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. rnI agree with you that the potion is too good to be true as are Lucius and Draco. But in my head, it all was necessary to bring about the ending. rnJust good fun, thats all.
hhm...i wonder if severus will get jealous of hermione and draco's friendship...:)
all in all, awesome chapter!!
Author's Response: Severus actions are, as always, unpredictable. rnThanks for the reviews. Stay tuned, more to come!
hhm...i wonder if severus will get jealous of hermione and draco's friendship...:)
all in all, awesome chapter!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Well, I'm glad Hermione and DRaco made peace with each other...See, even mortal enemies can become friends, if they just try to reach out to each other and understand each other's opinions.
This will be fascinating to read and to watch to see if the potion Snape made will help Lucius...
It was a wonderful chapter, and I can't wait for the next one!
Good luck writing it! ;0)
Author's Response: I definately think enemies can become friends. Draco and Hermione have some things in common and I believe if they could get over the bitterness, they could be friends. rnThanks for the review - stay tuned!
Hermione seems to be a big help in Snape's private labs...And she had her thinking cap on too, as she helped Snape out with the missing potion ingredent.
He seems to be tolerating her, especially after that missing link was found, for the potion.
And to have her join him at Malfoy Manor as Snape delivers L. Malfoy's potion.
That shall be interesting to watch...
Great story! I look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review... stay tuned!
luv it totally wicked
Author's Response: lol, thanks!
This is turning out to be interesting. Are you going to write something from Snape's point of view? I really want to know what he thinks about Hermione!
Author's Response: Be patient, grasshopper. All will be revealed in time ;)
ooh, very good. i like how you're developing your plot.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
