So awesome. I've never been a fan of this particular ship, but I have a degree in English and I found your comparison between Snape and Darcy quite thought-provoking (I took an entire course just on Austen!). Can I please please read the unedited version?
Author's Response: Wow, that's quite a compliment. I'm a huge Austen fan but never had any formal study in it. I just like the books. The first time I read P&P a few years ago I was immediately struck by the similarities. As Snape's story progressed in canon it became even more apparent to me. So in my own little fanfic world I can express that to others. The unedited version can be found on both Ashwinder & Fanfic.net - same penname, same story name & same chapter #. I hope you enjoy it!
Alan Rickman is in a movie called Bottle Shock. I saw a movie picture on a cab in New York. I glanced at the cab but it started moving before I could see it but it was Alan Rickman with a gun, I think. But he is one of the main actors.
Author's Response: Yeah, that is the latest movie that he has done. It was a festival movie and hasn't been released in theaters yet (which makes me mad). He also did a movie called Noble Son and it's the same thing, festival movie and not released. Bottle Shock is a movie about wine and Alan plays a judge in a competition. Not sure why he would have a gun, but you never know.
What a delightful story. I've read several attempts on this pairing and found it very refreshing that you chose to have the primary setting outside the school and use of the characters of Draco and his father. Keep up the good work.
PS. any idea of how many more chapters to expect?
Author's Response: Thanks. I've always been more drawn to their relationship beginning while Hermione is still his student (not sure what that says about me, but whatever), but it's fun to take Severus out of the school enviroment and see him about town. And Draco and Lucius, mmm... they're just too delectable not to throw into the mix. :) I'm not sure at this point how many chapters there will be. Only a couple more... definately less than 20. Stay tuned!
I love how you let Hermione be the know-it-all that she is. Many Severus/Hermione fics forget this important fact, making Hermione almost unrecognizable:(
Great chapter, I can hardly wait for more!:D
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Being a know-it-all is one of Hermione's foremost canon characteristics and important to include. I always find it hilarious when she is dealing with Severus because he's a bit of a know-it-all too so they have that in common but also clash over it. Next chapter will be out soon.
Severus Snape is a Snarky Bastard. But he is a unusal charater but a good one. That kiss was awsome and very cute. I am gald Severus is played by Alan Rickman for the movies because he is a snarky Bastard. But a cute one. Update soon.
Author's Response: I'm admittedly obsessed with Severus Snape. I honestly don't know why, but I love him to pieces, including him snarky bastard/death eater side. I am a sucker for bad boys (Lucius is my second favorite character). I'm also obsessed with Alan Rickman. I love everything he was ever in. He is incredibly sexy for an older man and his voice reduces me to a puddle of goo. lol Now the really weird thing is that when I see Severus in my mind (which is probably more often than what is normal, lol), he doesn't look like Alan Rickman. I don't know why. I love Alan as Snape in the movies, I think he does a fabulous job, but it's just not how I picture him in my mind. Next chapter will be up soon.
Yet another great chapter...I noticed that this chapter isn't up at Ashwinder yet. Is that one going to be any different, considering that they seem quite more... lax on sexual content and whatnot...?
Author's Response: Thanks! It will be the exact same content. Ashwinder's MODs are just taking longer than Mugglenet right now. It's almost always the other way around.
awww... that was sweet of severus to kiss hermione unexpectantly.
Author's Response: They seem to know just how to push each other's impulse buttons.
That was a good chapter. I have been in New York for a couple days so I haven't been able to use the internet so this is the first time I have been online. Those 2 new chapters were really good. When are you updating again?
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked them. I was wondering where you had gone. You're my most faithful reviewer. The next chapter is already in the hands of the MODs so it's up to them how quickly it gets up. Stay tuned!
wow, snape actually gave hermione a compliment. draco's right, hermione should have written that down...
Author's Response: To bad Muggle tape recorders don't work in the Wizarding world. But there's always penseives!
I am absolutely loving this fanfic, can I please read the un edited version of this chapter, please email it to me my email address is on my profile thanks
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed it. The un-edited version can be found at both Ashwinder & fanfic.net - same penname, story name & chapter #. Hope you like it!
me gusta tu novela muchisimo!
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me gusta tu novela muchisimo!
Author's Response: Thanks! Stay tuned!
oh wow. that was good. I wouldn't mind reading the unedited version
Author's Response: Thanks so much! The un-edited version can be found on both Ashwinder & Fanfic.net - same penname, same story name, same chapter #. Hope you enjoy!
Oh my gosh! I absolutely loved this chapter! You are an amazing writer! Please update!
Also can you send me the unedited version since I am very curious :P Thanks!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much! Un-edited version can be seen at both fanfic.net & Ashwinder under the same penname, same story title, and same chapter #. Hope you enjoy!
Bad Cliffie for two reasons! They weren't finished yet...and they hadn't talked! And what did Lucius want that was so important?! But we like cliffies, because we keep reading. And go Hermione for being so brave! I'm kind of glad they got to this point because of her, it keeps them much more in character.
Author's Response: Sorry to keep you suspense, but it must be done. *cue evil laughter* I agree that in order for Severus to committ such an act as giving in to his feelings, he would need a shove in that direction. Oh, if only I could be the one doing the shoving...
WOW. I was just wondering when you would update again. You did. Can you send me chapter 11 to Anablack52@yahoo.com
Author's Response: The un-edited version is posted on both Ashwinder & fanfic.net - under the same penname, story title & chapter #. Hope you enjoy!
lmao! I just flicked over to fanfiction.net and well the next chapter is funny! + the unedited version of this chapter is pretty good. i can see why mnff wouldnt allow it to be posted on here.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, it was a bit too graphic for this site but both versions get the point across.
awww... that was cute... wait... there's an un-edited version... cool...
Author's Response: Yes, you can see the un-edited version on Ashwinder or Fanfic.net - same penname, story name & chapter #.
wow is all i can say
Author's Response: I'll take "wow". Thanks!
Finally, Severus caves in to his feelings!Yay!about time!I am interested in reading the unedited version!I wonder what's wrong with Lucius?Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! I agree, its about freakin time Severus gets on the ball. You can see the un-edited version on fanfic.net or ashwinder - same penname, story name & chapter #. Hope you enjoy it!