Reviews For Vomica Domintor
Reviewer: Lilly Severus1224
Date: 10/23/08 22:09
Chapter: Chapter 1

omg i wanna read the unedited version!

Author's Response: The unedited version can be seen on both & Ashwinder - same penname, same story name, same chapter #.

Reviewer: Queen of the 4 Houses
Date: 10/22/08 14:53
Chapter: Chapter 11

I really like it so far. Haven't read all the chapters up until this one yet, but what I read, I liked. I would like to read the un-edited version. Thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you've liked it so far. The unedited version can be view at both Fanfic . net and Ashwinder - same pen name, same story name & same chapter #. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Nohope118
Date: 10/21/08 14:46
Chapter: Chapter 21

Lovee it.
how much longer until the next chapter?

Author's Response: Thanks! Next chapter should be up at any moment. Mods have had it for a few days.

Reviewer: Love_Snape
Date: 10/17/08 14:47
Chapter: Chapter 21

Oh that chapter was so good please update really soon. That chapter was really good but I wonder how Ron and Harry are going to take it. Hopefully Severus and Hermione know what they are doing but, this story is really really good. Update really soon.


Author's Response: Thanks you so much! Next chapter should be up anytime now. The mods have had it for several days.

Reviewer: unrealitygal
Date: 10/15/08 18:58
Chapter: Chapter 21

OK, please don't leave us hanging for three months before we read what happens next!! That would be torture!!

Author's Response: Don't worry. The next installment will be up as soon as it's processed. The last delay wasn't my fault. Mugglenet shut down the queue for 2 or 3 weeks. Barring any unforseen problems like that, chapter 22 will be up quickly.

Reviewer: True_Heir_of_Slytherin
Date: 09/26/08 22:01
Chapter: Chapter 20

I like the Malfor men even if their character especially Malfoy Sr is OOC. Ron's character is as expected but I hope Harry will be a bit more understanding towards the end. Between the two boys, Harry's more mature. I can't say that I like Ginny being with Draco instead of Harry Potter but to each is own. Overall, I like it and found it funny. I really like the story between Hermione and the snarky git of the dungeons... :-)

Reviewer: ljunberg03
Date: 09/25/08 19:43
Chapter: Chapter 11

I think this story is one of the most believable of any I have read, the characters especially. I would be interested in reading the un-edited version. Thanks for a great read!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Any time Hermione falls for Severus or vice versa, it's crazy unrealistic, lol. But I did try to make it as believeable as I could. The unedited version of chapter 11 can be found on both Ashwinder & - same pen name, same story name, same chapter #. I hope you like it!

Reviewer: kim113
Date: 09/25/08 18:22
Chapter: Chapter 11

i want to read the un edited version

Author's Response: The unedited version of chapter 11 can be found on both Ashwinder & - same pen name, same story name, same chapter #. I hope you like it!

Reviewer: keelhaulrose
Date: 09/22/08 20:33
Chapter: Chapter 20

I just came across this story, and I love it! Your writing style is beautiful. Keep 'em coming. And an unedited rendition of chapter 11 would be much appreciated

Author's Response: Thank you sooo much. It's always great to get a new fan. The unedited version of chapter 11 can be found on both Ashwinder & - same pen name, same story name, same chapter #. I hope you like it!

Reviewer: lifelessentities
Date: 09/22/08 14:54
Chapter: Chapter 20

I love it. The non-likeliness of it all eases my Hermione Snape fantasy. But this whole story is insanely unlikely. anyway, good job. Keeo updating.

Author's Response: Thanks! Oh yes, the whole story is completely unlikely to happen based on cannon, but that's the joy of fanfic! Stay tuned!

Reviewer: wiggles
Date: 09/21/08 22:08
Chapter: Chapter 3

I can't wait to see what happens. you're a really good writer!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so, so much.

Reviewer: wiggles
Date: 09/21/08 21:49
Chapter: Chapter 2

I can tell this story is going to be so awesome. Snape is so mean.

Reviewer: wiggles
Date: 09/21/08 21:19
Chapter: Chapter 1

That is SOOOOO Snape. awesome!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Lol, thanks. I tried to keep him snarky. I like him best that way :)

Reviewer: Love_Snape
Date: 09/21/08 16:42
Chapter: Chapter 20

I cant wait for 21 update really soon. I think Ginny has a deeper serect that she won't say but I might have a clue but I don't want to say anything in case i'm wrong. Update really really soon.


Author's Response: Ooh, you gotta tell me what you think the secret is! The submission queue is closed right now and won't reopen until 10/8, so I can't submit the next chapter until then.

Reviewer: The Oracle
Date: 09/16/08 15:36
Chapter: Chapter 19

I've always thought the pairing of "Hermione/Snape" was a bit too odd and disgusting for my liking (mostly because of their age difference), but your story has managed to change my mind. It's very well written and I can't wait for the next chapter to be posted.

Author's Response: Wow, that's a big compliment. I was actually just like you when I started reading fanfic. I saw the pairing HG/SS and was like, "Eew! That's disgusting!" Lol. But I read a really great story that made the pairing make a heck of a lot of sense, and now I'm a staunch defender that Severus is the only man that could ever make Hermione truely happy and truely "mad" at the same time.

Reviewer: shelayne
Date: 09/07/08 17:58
Chapter: Chapter 19

I'm really excited to see what the next chapter has in store for Snape and Hermione! I never thought I would actually end up liking Lucius or Malfoy, or even Snape, but you made them into very likeable characters. Update soon please! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad that you like the "softer side" of my Slytherins. I always figured that even a snarky bastard has to have another side. Stay tuned!

Reviewer: soyjoy
Date: 09/07/08 2:35
Chapter: Chapter 11

i wanted to read a sex storie i want sex

Author's Response: The unedited version of chapter 11 can be found on both Ashwinder & - same story name, penname & chapter #. This site is restricted as to what you can say, so you might want to check out the other version. Also, there will be some more "alone time" between Severus & Hermione in chapter 21 & 22.

Reviewer: Ang181708
Date: 09/07/08 1:50
Chapter: Chapter 11

I would love to see the un edited version... this is very well written

Author's Response: The unedited version of chapter 11 can be found on both Ashwinder & - same story name, penname & chapter #. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Love_Snape
Date: 09/05/08 18:34
Chapter: Chapter 19

Chapter 19 was really good. That was smart to have Draco wait for Severus and Hermione. Can't wait for chapter 20. Hopeful its almost done bcause you can't view more than 26 or 27 chapters but if it goes over I will view the soure and toggle it some. Update really really soon please.


Author's Response: Thanks! I just had to have the three of them enter together and cause more chaos! Chapter is done & should be up soon. As it stands now, there will be 23 chapters total. I am trying to write the last chapter now. It's hard to end things. Stay tuned!

Reviewer: lifelessentities
Date: 09/04/08 17:39
Chapter: Chapter 18

Fantastic, please update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks! It will be up soon!

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