it was great but as you said the ending came far far to soon.
Dear AlwaysSS,
Can't wait for the next story. I keep rereading this story and waiting for the next story update with the new story soon.
Ana
Author's Response: Ugh, sorry. I dropped the ball. I do have a quick little one-shot posted now. I should have let you know. It's called Happy Birthday, Professor Snape. Check it out on my profile. More new stuff is in the works, I promise.
I must read the real version. :D Please and thank you.
Author's Response: Author's Response: Unedited version can be read on both Ashwinder & Fanfiction.net under the same story name, pen name and chapter number. Hope you enjoy!
i would like the unedited version, please.
Author's Response: Unedited version can be read on both Ashwinder & Fanfiction.net under the same story name, pen name and chapter number. Hope you enjoy!
you are a seriously disturbed woman.
Author's Response: I'm not entirely sure how to take this. Is this an insult or a compliment? lol
i am interested in reading the unedited version of this. lol.
Author's Response: Unedited version can be read on both Ashwinder & Fanfiction.net under the same story name, pen name and chapter number. Hope you enjoy!
When are you going to add the new story or you still writing the story out? I really hope you have it done soon so I can leave some good reviews for you. Please put that new story out very soon.
Ana
Wonderful love story, I hope to read more from you soon!
By the way I noticed a previous reviewer giving some info on Alan Rickman. FYI there are two wonderful movies which were not mentioned in which he has some pretty major romantic roles. The oldest is 'Truely, Madly, Deeply and the other is "Sense and Sensibility" check them out if you haven't already!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. I'm a HUGE Alan Rickman fan and not just because of his portrayal of my favorite Slytherin. I've seen just about everything he's ever done. Didn't he make the quintessential Colonel Brandon? Mmm...
Dear AlwaysSS,
I thought you would like to know some info for your favorite charater and a movie that he is in Alan Rickman is 62 years old but he doesnt look that old. He was born in February 21, 1946 in Hammersmith, London, England. He's in the new movie Alice in Wonderland (2010) he's playing the caterpiller. Also in the movie Johnny Depp as the Mad Hatter, Anne Hathaway as the White Queen, Helena Bonham Carter as The Red Queen. Producing the movie the one the only TIM BURTON!! But Alan Rickman is so much sexier. SWEENEY TODD == OWN THE Collectors edition!!!! awesome!
Ariel (Ana)
Can you tell me what the next story is going to be titled so I can be ready for more interesting things. Please put out a new story very soon.
Ana
Author's Response: My next story is entitled "Rita's Skeeter's Revenge" but don't look for it anytime before the first of the year. With the holidays coming up, life is bound to get hectic and I'm still working on revising the beginning of Vomica Domintor. Since you're a fan of the story. I really hope that you'll read back through it once I've posted the changes. I've added a lot of stuff, tripling and even quadrupling the word count of most of the chapters. It has started to take on a life of its own. Anyway, I've set a deadline for myself to have it completely finished by the end of the year. That way I can post the changes and move away from Vomica Domintor for awhile... atleast until I start the sequel, lol. So, stay tuned and I'll be sure to send you a message once I've got the updates posted, that is if you're interested. Thanks again for being such a loyal supporter!
verrrry intrested in the unedited version
Author's Response: The un-edited version of chapters 11 & 22 can be found at both Ashwinder & Fanfiction - same penname, ssame story name & same chapter #. Hope you enjoy it!
Really good. I love the tantalizing bits about Draco and Ginny in this chapter. Hope the sequel comes soon.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Glad you're a Draco/Ginny fan, I plan to have some fun with those two! Stay tuned!
Wow, I didn't expect an ending! I do want to see the things you mentioned in your A/N, mainly Harry and Ron's reaction to her relationship with Severus. I was really glad for the length of this chapter, the previous one's were a little on the short side sometimes. I really enjoyed this story and I hope that you write post the sequel in the near future! Thanks for writing and updating quickly!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I know that no one really forsaw an ending at this point in the story, but I really had always envisioned it ending after the potion was registered. Hopefully knowing that a sequel is coming will make up for the less than satisfying ending. I agree that the chapters were too short, especially in the beginning. I'm working on a revision now that is significantly bulking them up and adding a lot of good stuff to the story. Anyway, stay tuned for the sequel! Thanks again for reviewing!
i really enjoyed the story!
well done!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
trust me I will stay for the next story and the next.
Ana
Author's Response: Awesome! Then I'll keep writing them!
I would be extremely interested in reading the un-edited version of this particular chapter. I found that you were able to keep many of the main ideas of the story as well as add a few of the details without being to risque and I commend you on that. It is often extremely hard to re-vise one's own ideas to fit the stipulations of others. By the way I would also like to congratulate you on the completion of the story and thank you for an excellent read and a great story in and of itself. Sincerely, Jenn
also my email is lewis7jl@cmich.edu
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, Jenn. The un-edited version of chapter 22 can be found at both Ashwinder & Fanfiction - same penname, ssame story name & same chapter #.
Chapter 23.
OMG!!!! That was such a good chapter HOLY CRAP!! You had to end it. This story was the best most logical story that I have ever read that keep with the real theme of the story. Can't wait for another story. Hopefully you'll have another story about them. Please, hopefully you do.
Your most faithful reviewer,
Ana
Slytherin House
Author's Response: Thanks, Ana. You're awesome. After I'm finished with this story, I have another that's partially finished called Rita Skeeter's Revenge (it's a Hermione/Snape story too,) and then I'm gonna start the sequel to Vomica Domintor. I hope you stick around for my other stuff!
oh my gosh, by all means, don't leave us hanging!! that was a great story! I'd also love to read some of your original chapters that you said you had to edit because of the rules. Again, great story, I can't wait for the sequel!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hope that you'll enjoy the sequel just as much. The un-edited versions of chapters 11 & 22 can be seen at Ashwinder & Fanfiction - same penname, same story name & same chapter #s. Enjoy!
pretty good story. writings improved tremendiusly since the start. keep writing
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I agree that my writing style has changed. The updates I've been doing on the beginning of the story are going great so far. I hope that you'll read back through once they've all been uploaded.
Oi! That's it? Hurry hurry hurry with the sequel!!!
Author's Response: Lol, thanks for reading. I hope you enjoy the sequel!
