Reviewer: Trucker
Date: 04/30/09 0:21
Chapter: The Full Moon

Great story, just a little coding prolem in this cahpter:

about your [i]condition[/i]?

I believe you should have used the less than and greater than symbols to bracket the italics code.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I fixed the coding error. I don't know how it got by me. Thank you for pointing it out. Terri

Reviewer: Sdogg
Date: 04/29/09 9:18
Chapter: Epilogue

Not a bad story. Wasn't the best I've read, for it was lacking action, or something, I'm not quite sure yet. But for a story where a person doesn't move from his spot the entire time, it is pretty good, and you definitely picked a perfect character to write about.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. It was my first attempt at first person pov and took a long time and many revisions to get it to this. I understand what you are saying about the action, but as you also said, Bill didn't really move at all from the beginning to the end. Just a stroll through his memories. Thanks again. Terri

Reviewer: Auror Tonks
Date: 04/28/09 13:36
Chapter: Epilogue

V. good, i enjoyed it a lot. But one thing could you clear up for me, is when Fred says "One of the best Quidditch players I have seen in a long time and Ron was trying to teach her chess."

Who do u mean, Ginny or Ron? Which is the best Quidditich player?

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I meant Ginny. Thank you for pointing out it is unclear. I will go in and edit it so it is clearer. I sometimes forget the reader isn't in my head. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Thanks again. Terri

Reviewer: ginnygirl16
Date: 04/25/09 19:50
Chapter: The Full Moon

Okay, I'm off to add this story to my favorite 'cause it is brilliant! Anyways, just wanted to tell you how good it is, and that I hope you update as soon as you can. Great job!

--ginnygirl16

Author's Response: Thank you. The epilogue is written and back from my beta, so it will be posted soon. I hope you enjoy the ending. Terri

Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 08/08/08 10:37
Chapter: Prologue

I liked this. I loved hearing about Weasley life from Bill's point of view. I was getting so carried away that I'd forgotten until right at the end that he'd been savaged by Greyback. Made me shiver.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I am glad you got so caught up in the story the reality of what happened 'made you shiver'. I enjoyed writing Bill's story. I thought it needed to be told. I am going to be submitting the next chapter soon.

Reviewer: Afifa
Date: 06/05/08 6:48
Chapter: Prologue

Lovely starting, Terri!

I like how you bring in all the Weasley kids one by one, and even Harry in the end.

You've kept the fact that Bill was a Head Boy in your mind, and made studies go easy on him. Very good!

Over all, it was nice! =) 



Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as well. I will be resubmitting chapter 1 soon. Terri

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