Reviews For One More Night
Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 08/03/10 21:11
Chapter: Into the Dark

This gave me a lump in my throat. It was so, so sad. But, it was only so sad because it was so well-written and honest. I liked it very much. Thank you.

Author's Response: You, my friend, are amazing. I am so glad you reviewed this story (even though I don't like this story very much) because it's given me reason to continue writing! Because I have hope that one day Miss 4Life will come along and read and review it, and she is always so kind. So thank you! Thank you for always reviewing!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 07/07/08 18:45
Chapter: Into the Dark

That was so beautiful. We should all do that, it reminds me of Pollyanna who when bad things happened always tried to find something to be glad about, the glad game. I loved the different diaries in the shop, any new magic gadgets get my approval. And it was so like Luna to use up almost the entire time in such a frivolous way, perhaps she knew there was very little to say to Dean as they were so well connected. It was quite vague at the beginning, I thought Harry was the one trying to bring Ginny back as a ghost, you really did well to throw me off the scent as it were. Malfoy's attitude was quite amusing, he'd probably had so many officials trouping in and out of his home that he was used to it. Very interesting idea, I love when new spells are invented in fics, and this is such a wonderful one as people can say all the things they never got the chance to. Although, don't you find it hard when facing someone to remember everything you want to tell them? Perhaps it's best to share your thoughts as they come to you, while you still have the opportunity, there's nothing like communication. Sorry, I digress, it's just I love it when fics make me think, even if my thoughts don't make sense to anyone else. Thanks again for another beautifully written piece.

Reviewer: Elf01
Date: 05/26/08 4:44
Chapter: Into the Dark

I fell in love with this pairing during Deathly Hallows and I'm glad to read a fic centred on it. Your characterization is very good and so is the premise. I also liked the ending. I think that for those characters it is very appropiate.

One tiny nitpick: As much as I enjoyed the pairing it is not a canon pairing (and has been confirmed as not happening), maybe you should consider adding an AU warning or authors note stating this.

Reviewer: Cerberus_Omega1993
Date: 05/24/08 9:33
Chapter: Into the Dark

Really sweet and touching...

Very well written, too. In the beginning, I thought Harry was the one who had lost his wife, hahaha...

See you around ;)

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