Reviewer: CAPS_LOCK_ADDICTE
Date: 01/30/09 4:44
Chapter: Chapter 5 Greater Expectations

Nice Chapter!
Rose and Scorpius seem very similar to Ron and Hermione in the way they act with each other...
And poor Albus, afraid of heights!

Author's Response:

The main difference between rose/scorp as compared to ron/hermione is that scorp can hold his own intellectually with rose. It's more of two equals butting heads while ron's comebacks were pretty much relegated to "oh yeah?" status LOL! These two can butt heads over a topic for days and not exaust the arguments...Ron and Hermione were unable to butt heads for more than a few sentences before Ron left his depth LOL! Albus is pretty much afraid of a lot of things, but his fear of flying is his most ironic. Harry Potter's son is afraid to fly what a scandle!

SLy

Reviewer: rosemerta
Date: 01/26/09 16:06
Chapter: Chapter 14 Quidditch Tryouts and Other Tragedies

oh very cool. ooh now albus will be upset with the type of broom james got. and the tension mounts..

Author's Response:

He's more upset at Hufflepuff's deminishing chance for a house cup than anything. Thanks for the review!

SLy

Reviewer: Quilter
Date: 01/20/09 15:32
Chapter: Chapter 14 Quidditch Tryouts and Other Tragedies

I love your story. Everytime there is a new chapter I reread at least one chapter before so that I get reaquainted with the story and characters. The read just gets better everytime. Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing the story. Been sharing your story title and name on other fansites. Hope there will be a few more readers.

Author's Response:

Thankyou very much! I hope you keep reading!

SLy

Reviewer: RWHGHP_51892
Date: 01/14/09 12:14
Chapter: Chapter 14 Quidditch Tryouts and Other Tragedies

Ive already read your story on FF.net. I loved it. I would have commented on there but my computer wont let me. So im not giving away any spoilers, so I better stop typing. Thanks for this, it got me through my moms surgery.

Author's Response:

Wow! That's a pretty significant comment! Glad me and the trio could help!

Thanks for reading!

SLy

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/13/09 21:09
Chapter: Chapter 14 Quidditch Tryouts and Other Tragedies

Another great chapter. I love Rose, Albus and Scorpius together. They could easily become the new Trio. Looking forward to lots more of them.

Author's Response:

Yep, they have a wackey chemistry, I'm really not quite sure what they are going to do next LOL!

SLy

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 01/13/09 19:47
Chapter: Chapter 12 The Choice

There were a lot of good ideas in this chapter especially the subtlety of the fine line of getting along and being a victim.

Author's Response:

I was worried this chapter would cause controversy because it creates more questions than it answers. I think that theme of getting along without being a victim will resonate a lot in this book and those following.

thanks!

SLy

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 01/13/09 19:38
Chapter: Chapter 11 Flying Like A Dragon's After You

I did not like Charlie's technique. I would think that if Albus had a real disorder (that is if this were real life) there would be no guarentee that Albus could handle this. He could have just as easily panicked again and got burnt (if only figuratively since the dragon wasn't real). And when Albus found out it wasn't a real dragon it would have made him feel worse imho.

Your next chapter redeems the story.

Author's Response:

I think they turned to Charlie as a last ditch effort, and Charlie is bound to not be too "kid friendly"considering the critters he's surrounded himself with. I guess it's subjective, there seemed to be a lot that enjoyed the chapter, but that doesn't make your point less valid. It is what it is I guess. Glad you enjoyed the subsequent chapters.

SLy

Reviewer: BKL8008
Date: 01/13/09 14:22
Chapter: Chapter 14 Quidditch Tryouts and Other Tragedies

I like the setup of the team.
"Don't hurt your own players." That was great! Normally I don't like seeing Firsties make the teams, but in this case, it works.
Scorpius' problem with the gift of the gloves was very well done.

Author's Response:

The Violence Sisters didn't get that nickname for being cute and cuddly LOL! The Hufflepuff team is a ragtag bunch but that reflects their house. Scorpius and Albus making the team was a interesting twist to me as well, but It really set up some challenges to make it seem possible, Scorpius is the flyer, Albus has a cannon arm. I knew a boy about Albus age that threw 75 mph fast balls and he threw them hard! They sizzled as they came through the air! So Albus being able to break a hand is not too far fetched. Scorpius' reaction about the gloves was very Malfoy I admit. My kids aren't always going to be sympathetic. He's sometimes a cold-aloof emo-brat, just like dad, but I like to think he has some redeeming qualities. Stay tuned!

SLy

Reviewer: BKL8008
Date: 12/30/08 21:39
Chapter: Chapter 13 Perspective Gained

There was so much good stuff in this one, I don't know where to begin!

I'm a bit confused on the dream, though. It almost seems as if Charlie knows something about it?

All in all, good chapter. The scene with the kids and their near run-in with serious drug abuse was well handled.

Author's Response:

Charlie things he was the only one in it. He doesnt realize that it was Albus' dream as well. The true question is, did Albus pull him into his dream or did Albus got into Charlies. The personal details that Charlie would know seems to indicate that Albus went into Charlies dream. I know it's confusing but hey...Albus has a mind of his own these days! Me and Mary Shelley have some things in common LOL!

SLy

Reviewer: Quilter
Date: 12/30/08 8:49
Chapter: Chapter 12 The Choice

Read this last night, but had to come back and review.

I realy like how Albus is growing up here. Taking to heart ..."But when the time comes, that you are faced with a choice, between what is right, and what is easy..."
I believe in this statement, we all need to take it to heart and those with children need to teach it to the children.
Thank you for contniuing to share your gift and skill with the written word. Watching for more.

Author's Response:

Yeah Albus is bound to be reflective about all the changes hes undergone...this strange dream s just another stone to turn over.

SLy 

Reviewer: Quilter
Date: 12/29/08 22:38
Chapter: Chapter 13 Perspective Gained

I TOTALLY love this story. I try to check often for this an a couple of other stories. Today we got two chapters, yeah!!!. When I got to the end my daughter was so engrossed she "what, that's all...I thought you said there was two chapters." We read both. Thank you so much for sharing, this is a gift that you have, please continue.

Author's Response: I will try too! If you don't mind see if you can tell others that read fics on this site about this story...I'd really like to see more traffic...I think it's deserving! Thanks for reading and reviewing! SLy

Reviewer: crystalphoenix
Date: 12/29/08 21:29
Chapter: Chapter 13 Perspective Gained

i rlly liked this chapter- very nice

Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to drop a note an tell me so!

SLy

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/28/08 18:24
Chapter: Chapter 1 Compartmentalized

I'd forgotten about that. I thought he had just fixed the bike after it crashed at Tonk's parents.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/28/08 0:28
Chapter: Chapter 13 Perspective Gained

I am now going to be MORE than anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Because of Mugglenet's review system being so byzantine, I usually just respond to the last review in a chain. I am glad you found this fic, and are evidentally enjoying it. I really put a lot of time and effort into this so getting a review is my reward for a job well done. I just wish all of the many people who read would drop a note...but alas with this review system it takes quite and effort LOL! So I hope you comeback and keep reading! See you aroudn MNet!

SLy

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/28/08 0:08
Chapter: Chapter 12 The Choice

Priceless is the only word I can come up with at this point in time.

Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad you think so!

SLy

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/27/08 23:57
Chapter: Chapter 11 Flying Like A Dragon's After You

Too fantastic and funny for words. This is another story that should be published so those who have not yet discovered MNFF can read it.

Author's Response: Well getting sued into the next universe would prevent that LOL! Thanks for thinking it worthy of such treatment though! SLy

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/27/08 23:45
Chapter: Chapter 10 Vampires, Roses, Wandwork...(Part Two)

Wish I knew how to say betterer and betterer in a different way.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/27/08 23:31
Chapter: Chapter 10 Vampires, Roses, Wandwork...(Part One)

I will keep repeating myself because I'm a reader not a writer. This is a fantastic story and I'm loving every word of it.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/27/08 23:22
Chapter: Chapter 9 The End of a Very Long Day!

Garbage my a.......! I have not laughed so much in ages. This is one of the best stories I have read on MNFF

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/27/08 23:03
Chapter: Chapter 8 Mal-feasance

And the best court jester I've ever read. This story just keeps getting betterer and betterer.

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